My apologies, but your application has been...
Why did I deny you?
Expand on your ORQs, and would your character REALLY want revenge on his family? He hasn't seen them for hundreds of years, surely he would have felt some closure, that he was moving on. You would have to be insane to hold onto a feeling like that for almost 200 years.
Some Places That May Help You
Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/
Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005
Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/
A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/
An FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/
Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.