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Why did I deny you? Fix your formatting, very clumsy and hard to read. I wrote a guide for applicants formatting down below in the links section. Your ORQs lacked detail, a paragraph answer for each is certainly better than 2 sentences. Minor, but we don't have Creepers. They are disabled mobs. Your definition of powergaming was incorrect in accordance to this server's ruleset. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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Why did I deny you? Your ORQs lacked substance, you need to EXPLAIN and help us FEEL it more. Your definition of powergaming was not correct in accordance to this server's ruleset. Your spelling was not overly fantastic, use Word's spellchecker or any online spellchecker you can find. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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Why did I deny you? Expand on your ORQs, let us know how your character would act or feel in those situations. Probably the biggest issue: You can't come into the server as a magic user. Most mages aren't good with a sword AND are a full fledged magic user. Give examples for your power/meta gaming definitions, it let's us know that YOU know the definitions correctly. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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Why did I deny you? Your definition of metagaming was kind of correct but maybe think of a better example? Your definition of powergaming was not in accordance to our ruleset and ideals. You need to expand on your ORQs. A minor setback, but voting really improves your chances of being accepted. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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Why did I deny you? Your definitions of powergaming and metagaming need improvement. You need a biography, like really. It is so important that we understand your character's RPing skills, but, you don't have a character. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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Why did I deny you? I was thinking, this is so good! Until, I got to your powergaming definition, and then it slowly went...away from what we desire. Your definition of powergaming was not really in accordance to this server's ruleset. Although, I seriously understand you put a lot of effort into finding it out, but you need to look at the forums and the wiki, not Wikipedia. Your biography needs to have lore from Asulon, and you can't be a Worgan, unless you prove your roleplaying skills and write up bunches of lore regadring their existance in Asulon etc etc. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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Why did I deny you? I would like to see more in your ORQs, let us know how your character thinks, feels and reacts in said situation. Possibly work on your spelling/ grammar? THere is a very simple method to check this, use online spellcheckers or just copy paste this into Word. Your bio says your character grew up in Al'Khazar, but that city died probably 50 ingame years ago? Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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Why did I deny you? We don't live in SPARTA. We live in ASULON. You had no mention of ANY lore relating to anything important. You aren't the SPARTA KING. You disincluded some questions, and you need expansion on your defintiions. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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