hypercrit

Why did I deny you? Your Definition of Roleplaying Much too short, and somewhat incorrect in accordance to this servers rules regarding it. Roleplaying, in my mind, is not playing a game as if it is real life, it is forming a character and learning from his or her experiences, and creating a personality that you slot into when playing. Definitions of Meta And Power-gaming Your metagaming definition needs work, and you didn't have one for powergaming. Try to build up your definitions. Biography was cliche Almost everyone has a biography where their parents died, or their mother died during childbirth. Think of something original that we as the app team would want to read, and a character that people haven't RP'ed with a hundred million times. Answers to the Situation Questions The elven one shows powergaming, how did you kill the two bandits? How did one not fight back while you were killing the other? You need to examine that character in that situation and decided how he would react and allow the bandits to fight back. Your shopping one was WAY too short, make it INTERESTING. Make the shop keeper try to take your money when you pull it out of your purse, make something happen. You can repost in 2 hours, so you can go grab a cookie and get to work on editing. If you have any qualms about your application or need help, please PM me, as I would be happy to see you on the server, your character and your understanding of roleplaying need work.

Denied. Answer all questions. I can't move this on my phone, but it is going in the denied forum.

Not sure how to move this to the Denied Forum yet....

The app, to say the least, was ALRIGHT. It was below average, for a number of reasons. First of all, you didn't get the formatting right, and that is understandable for new members such as you. What you need to do is copy the format from the thread where you get the format, and fill in the blanks. Also, your biography is too short, what made your character friendly? Was it a good childhood, or did certain events make him that way? We want to know about your character, about every aspect of it. The answer to the elf and bandit question needs some work. How did the bandits react when they saw you? Did they try to slice at you with a knife? Also, for the second question, try to make something fantastic happen. I always like apps I read when they don't use the usual stale answer of, "I bought something then left." Use your imagination, I'm sure you could turn that into a very interesting read. Your answers for power and meta gaming are wrong, read up on them and look at all the support threads in the application center, they have information on them to help you. Also, you NEED a skin to get accepted, and it has to suit your character. Thank you for reading, I hope you can learn from your mistakes you made here.

You've read Maze Runner? With the Grievers? I would RP the mad scientist too...oh please please!

Like the Hunger Games! YES YES YES! I would so do this! Pwease admins!