ClassyDryad

MC Name:

         ClassyDryad

Character's Name:

         Da'lisse Oussana

Character's Age:

         116

Character's Race:

         Dark Elf

What magic(s) will you be learning?

         Air Evocation

Teacher's MC Name:

         BuffBadger

Teacher's RP Name:

         Thromdrick Irongut

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         there are a lot of them so I will post it separately.

Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

         Yes

On 1/25/2024 at 8:57 PM, Punished_Pup said:

26/1/2024

Various Grammar and formatting adjustments

Epiphytes already have a mechanic in their own lore in which their eyes remain damaged/unusable if they are a seer, regardless of rebirths or regeneration (and do not need to be included.)

I like the vibe but you could probably expand it into a boon that helps any one chosen non-combative mundane skill for variety. Like one person might want one that makes them obsessed with farming. Could limit it to just arts as well.

There is a naztherak boon that also allows people to read any language like seer, but otherwise yes based.

I think the fact that most gates on the server where closed for several months had much more of an impact on server health then "bloat" ever will.  Some people will see a small build made for a group in another time zone from them and have a violent reaction at the "empty dead build stealing muh rp" in the same way they hissed about there only being three places to find rp a year or so ago.

While I think some of the new stuff could work, I'm not really sure what about fire evocation needs a rewrite so badly. The current lore is formatted much more clearly than this one, so why not just make an ammendment?

Why. Why did you kill those people Unni. Those innocent people, they did nothing wrong. The screams Unni, why!

Character Artefact Name: Curse of the Depths

Character Artefact Number: 4

Name of the character possessing the artefact: Nava Oussana

Your character's race/subrace: Dark Elf

The IGN of the ET who granted the character artefact: Qizu

Do you consent to this CArt?: Yes

"In general, we will address any critical amendments that may be needed (such as loopholes, errors, misplaced parts between lore/guide, etc.) but will disallow any further changes to Shamanism until further notice."

50 Morbillian shaman rewrites ≠ math error ammendment 

(To creamy I am on my phone sue me)

I like the ideas under the beastman section, but I feel as though Hou-Zi may be a poor choice to test this concept just based purely off their appearance.

Official Certification of Excellence

It is my great honor upon 14th of the Deep Cold, S.A. 163, that I bestow upon 'the Grub Bucket' the most highest and prestigious of honors of "SS Rank Stall" and "Best Eating Space in the West." They have rightfully earned this accolade through fine service, warm hospitality, and among the best preparations of spicy tiger meat I have ever witnessed. I would urge all citizens of Nor-Veleyth, as well as all members of the descendant dysphoria, to take their time to partake in this true marvel of the contemporary era.

I would like to extend further special acknowledgment to the "Baggis" of the giants of Hazum, for its novel presentation and strong fundamentals.

ռαʋα ¤ʊʂʂαռα

Nava Oussana: Councilor of  Nor-Velyth, Matriarch of Clan Oussana, Chief Food Inspector

3 hours ago, NightcastorKitty said:

we dont have Treant CAs and Epiplytes can't use ashwood like that anyway. Like I get the point, but its rather redundant when nothing can even do this. 

Its copied over from the old lore. I assume it means no ashwood entlings.

I think the spam of vassals without any oversight is worse (as someone who tried to do a vassal that fell through.)

While there are 22 20 realms, there are essentially forty or more vassals on the map due to how you can essentially go as far as to stack multiple on a single tile with little oversight.

This means the map has 60 or more different cities/towns/yada on the map at any given time. If the server was evenly spread between each and every one of these places every settlement would have 2-3 players rn, rising to 5 during peak numbers.

+1 Any advantage you get from ashwood is obtained better in another material (even in the other woods.)

Don't be STINKY.

1 hour ago, Lord_of_losers said:

thanks i fixed this post now it wont be auto denied

You even got the spelling right! ty so much

Doesn't have [Amendment] at the front of the post. Deny this.

MC Name: ClassyDryad

RP Name: Nava Oussana (Sometimes Nava, or some other spoopy name, its the third slot)

Persona ID: #53315

Netherwart blocks and creeping vines!

-=-= The Velvet =-=-

== In the filth it will be found  ==

Veiled by illumination are the hidden colors of the void which form the lifeblood of reality. That sinew which makes all things one whole within existence’s teguments.

By this, the glow of the dark sky, the sinews of constellations, the elements of the world, and the dysphoria of flesh are all one as the Velvet, the lightless viscera. All effects the whole, and so small observations bring forth enlightenment.

In the dichotomy of revelation, where light reveals truths without, the Velvet melts away the false-tissues to reveal the truth beneath. That of the world’s heart, of the self, and of even fate.

== The High Sinews  ==

== As above, so below  ==

In the heavens above there is a thin hide, whose taught form lets the colors of the void shine through. We see this illumination as black, for our mortal viscera is incapable of comprehending it. It is the oppressive hollow ooze which higher truths drift within.

Floating amidst the ooze of unseen light are those observed by mortal flesh, the stars which make up the countless realms of Aenguls. These godly specks are not of the Velvet, but are bound together by black sinew which forces them to float together as beds of gleaming algae within the murk.

There is then the bone between high and low, the clouds which paint the sky above and hide and reveal the lights in their own wanderings. The fickle flesh hides what misleads, and shines other portents that much brighter.

== The Low Marrows  ==

== Delve below, and see all that is within  ==

Down upon the earthen husk of Mundus exists the tangible manifestations of the Velvet. The flesh, blood, and low elements which make up most existences. In illumination it appears as a false shell, and rots to the incision of truth.

The low elements are that of fire, earth, air, and water, manifesting in environmental pustules from the world itself in a manner such as weather, disasters, and the seasons. They come in cycles and advents, as the constellations make the boils well and shrink.

The flesh of life spreads and pulses through the world, digging through its skin as it splits and changes to unseen sides. The festering is guided along my movements of the Velvet it is one with; leaves dying, beasts migrating, crops growing, cocoons unweaving.

Descendant kind finds its fate entangled in the silken web of this oneness, illness, tragedy, and other events of life both caused by and influencing the Velvet as a whole. Should a being  be brought directly to potent sinew, such venom will melt away the lies which shroud and reveal a being’s true nature.

== The Vital Auguries  ==

== Of the powers, the greatest is knowledge ==

An understanding of the sinewed webs brings with it competence and understanding of the world. While as limitless as the variety of the Velvet, there are particular things that shine through the skin.

Fleshworking: With understanding of the fates and flesh, one can heal the body and mind through the balancing of their body’s ichors, the excision of that festers, and the touch of that which poisons. This expands not just to medicine, but to an overall understanding of fleshen life and its movements.

Foresight: Through careful observation of the Velvet, most often through the viscera of flesh, self-affliction of poisons, sinew of constellations, or combinations of all three, can grant the wise the ability to predict future events with greater precision than is possible with mere logic.

Revelation: Through the venomous forms of the Velvet, truth is calcinated from the lies which engulf it. That which drives a person, that which is hidden, that which truly represents them, all is brought to the surface to bubble under the invisible glow of the Velvet.

Yep mine

I... They did art for each constellation. I want this

Make it the same color as the rest of the redlines or else reeeeeeeeeeee!!!! 

Though more seriously this is fair, and consistent with other similar CAs.

The goons are simply too powerful. They alone understand the power of ooc mechanics, and are capable of intercepting the invisible pillar network!

 

Good idea however ummmm I don't like frost witches so they shouldn't get anything...