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  1. QhGzOdk5ugwvQHfsB9JUHEh7pUQ3qPxxg1ybFo_o

    Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

     

    I. Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

    II. There are several issues that need to be fixed within your biography.

    a. Mali’aheral are high elves, yet every other part of your application states you are a wood elf.

    b. Elves are naturally infertile, and find it difficult to have children--therefore your character couldn’t have had 9 siblings.

    c. Laurelin is an ancient settlement that is long destroyed. Your character could not have lived there.

    d. Caerme’onn is an existing seed and you would need permission from the head of the family to be a part of them starting out.

    e. Taynei'Hiylu was a heavily work in progress piece of lore that I believe was never added. Please remove the reference to her in your biography.

    f. The Great War is not an event that happened. If you have a link to lore on the wiki that references it, you are more than welcome to send it my way and I can reconsider allowing this reference.

    g. Having a ”token Dark Elf friend” is grounds for instant denial--or a token anything friend for that matter. Please refrain from using such a term in your biography.

    h. Aeldin is a sort of tall tale. No one really knows if it’s real or not. As such, please do not reference having lived there.

     

    III. Your character cannot be named Lizalfos, as that is the name of a species of monster within The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild. Please try to be original with your character name, and Google “wood elf fantasy name generator” if you are struggling to come up with a name.

     

    IV. Wood elves with reddish, auburn, or ginger hair are fine--outright red hair is not a natural wood elven hair color. Wood elves cannot have purple eyes, either.


    V. Your character needs one negative personality trait at the least.

     

    VI. Your roleplay scenario requires two actions and two pieces of dialogue from your character--you have not met this requirement.

     

    After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @UwUPlant#0017, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

  2. QhGzOdk5ugwvQHfsB9JUHEh7pUQ3qPxxg1ybFo_o

    Your application has been denied due to no response within the allotted 24-hour timeframe. Feel free to re-apply whenever you wish! PM me here or on Discord @UwUPlant#0017 if you have questions.

  3. 1FVrr_EOTluCLUoQu4yQKvdm8h6PfTxTFKgkOk3N

    Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

     

     

    I. Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

     

    II. Your Character Biography states a few things that would need to be tweaked to comply with application standards/rules.

    a. The shorthand for Dark Elves on LotC is ‘ker (shortened form of mali’ker which is what Dark Elves are called in Elven), not Drow.

    b. Velunor was a settlement on the continent of Atlas, which has been uninhabitable for decades. Since your character is 18, she would have been born on the continent of Arcas and couldn’t have moved back to Atlas. Due to Velunor not really working here, the mention of it would need to be removed and you’d need a new, valid lore reference.

    c. Your mention of “a dark substance in the midst” doesn’t really make much sense. Please remove/alter this.

     

    III. Unfortunately, we greatly discourage playing villain characters of this degree as a new player, as we aren’t sure if you’d be quite acquainted enough with our server to follow the villainy rules properly. If you still wish to play a villain character, I recommend you start with one that is much more toned down.

     

    IV. Dark elves cannot have pink eyes. Please alter this in your physical description/skin. Additionally, the inside of your character’s hands (the sides facing the torso) seem to be discolored.

     

    V. Please alter any and all grammar/spelling errors you can (I suggest using apps like Grammarly). Additionally, please clear the strikethrough formatting and the alternating cApS of your Roleplay Scenario.

     

    VI. Just a note, elves are considered adults in their society at age 50, so your character would be mentally and physically 18, but culturally considered a child.

     

     

    If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @UwUPlant#0017 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Guide as well.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/
    https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F 
    https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

     

  4. QhGzOdk5ugwvQHfsB9JUHEh7pUQ3qPxxg1ybFo_o

    Your application has been denied due to no response within the allotted 24-hour timeframe. Feel free to re-apply whenever you wish! PM me here or on Discord @UwUPlant#0017 if you have questions.

  5. Changed Status to Under Review

    1FVrr_EOTluCLUoQu4yQKvdm8h6PfTxTFKgkOk3N

    Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

     

    I. Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️ 
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

     

    II. Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

     

    III. Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

     

    If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @UwUPlant#0017 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Guide as well.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/
    https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
    https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

  6. 8a18boON9Xh2S5fsvZQlLMQvTX28zSnTFgemzg9k

    Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

     

    Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg UwUPlant, or if I’m not online, you can find me on discord @UwUPlant#0017 Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do /creq along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!

     

    After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:
     

    /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

     

    When joining, the bot may be down that normally automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. So, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!

     

    I highly recommend you join the LotC discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!

    https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides 

  7. 8a18boON9Xh2S5fsvZQlLMQvTX28zSnTFgemzg9k

    Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

     

    Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg UwUPlant, or if I’m not online, you can find me on discord @UwUPlant#0017 Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do /creq along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!

     

    After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:
     

    /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

     

    When joining, the bot may be down that normally automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. So, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!

     

    I highly recommend you join the LotC discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!

    https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides 

  8. Good evening! Muffins is going on a temporary hiatus and as such I will be handling your application. Please get in touch with me either here on the forums or at my Discord (UwUPlant#0017) if you have questions or want to alert me that you’ve updated your app. Thank you!

  9. Good evening! Muffins is going on a temporary hiatus and as such I will be handling your application. Please get in touch with me either here on the forums or at my Discord (UwUPlant#0017) if you have questions or want to alert me that you’ve updated your app. Thank you!

  10. QhGzOdk5ugwvQHfsB9JUHEh7pUQ3qPxxg1ybFo_o

    Your application has been denied due to no response within the allotted 24-hour timeframe. Feel free to re-apply whenever you wish! PM me here or on Discord @UwUPlant#0017 if you have questions.

  11. 1FVrr_EOTluCLUoQu4yQKvdm8h6PfTxTFKgkOk3N

    Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

    I. Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

     

    II. Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
     https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

     

    III. Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

     

    IV. Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

     

    V. Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

     

    VI. Your Character name is ill-fitting for an orc character. Feel free to Google search fantasy name generators/orc name generators.

     

    VII. Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

     

    VIII. Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
    https://app.grammarly.com/ 

     

    If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @UwUPlant#0017 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Guide as well.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/
    https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

     

  12. QhGzOdk5ugwvQHfsB9JUHEh7pUQ3qPxxg1ybFo_o

    Your application has been denied due to no response within the allotted 24-hour timeframe. Feel free to re-apply whenever you wish! PM me here or on Discord @UwUPlant#0017 if you have questions.

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