[Denied] My Whitelist Application

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Name: Ryan_the_Just

Age: 17

I understand this server is PG-13.

I have read, and agreed to the rules.

Hostile and toxic behavior isn't allowed.

I understand the rules.

I was looking for a good roleplay server.

Roleplaying: Acting as a character, or someone one isn't.

Metagaming: Using help from others outside of the RP.

Powergaming: To reach a goal in the style of rp.

 

Name: Ryan, Ryan the Just

Male

Human (Possibly an Imp if it is allowed by you?)

Ryan is a human(Or Imp) boy, who lives  in Kal'Ordolm, the small port town in Urguan. Up to his seventeen years of living near the open sea, he's been waiting for adventure. But then, it clicked: He would set out, and find adventure, himself. What adventures and maidens he may discover, in unknown to him. Only time will tell.

Ryan is Quirky, kind, courageous, and lovable. He also enjoys his time sailing the ocean.

The boy has always wanted to go on an adventure!

Ryan is a very just, and honorable swordsman.

However, he can sometimes feel lonely when he isn't doing something.

Ryan is a slim, 6ft tall, 126lb boy, with bright blue eyes, and crisp brown hair. He doesn't look like much of anything, but he feels like he can achieve great things. (With Imp ears if allowed)

 

Thank you for your time.

-Ryan the Just

 

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Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

-Please use the full application format.

-More server lore must be included in the biography.

-The biography must be expanded on.

-The closest thing to an imp is a halfling. Which is half dwarf half human.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

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