[Denied] Taylan's Application 4

[TheTaylanPro 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Deepad63
How old are you?: 16
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  Moderator verdicts are final. Do not press the issue or go to another moderator if such a verdict is unfavorable to you.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No, I understand all rules.
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Very nice a RPG server.
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?:  The person at the keyboard playing the roleplay character.
What is metagaming?:  The use of out of character knowledge in character.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             What is powergaming?:  Godmoding by controlling another roleplayer’s character without permission.
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Mehmed
Character’s sex: Male
Character’s race: Human
Character’s age: 34
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Mehmed's family live a cave and fighting bandits. Mehmed's mother very good use bow. A day bandits ganging Mehmet's home. Mehmed's father died this war. Mehmed and Mehmed's mother escaped. 3 years later Mehmed's mother died with illness. he introduce a man and this man name is David. He and David go to Savoy. But David is died with a bandit. He is go  a Istria and he is a  Swordman. He think, if he believe he can everything. Previously, it was a caravan guard. The bandits left the caravan guarding the caravan when injured Mehmed Press. There is a girl who loves Istria  where he lives, but not opened. Baron came almost for the sake of peril.H e think will get revenge for their leisure time. He want to kill bandit's leader and enemy Barons. to strengthen Istria where the soldier is a very experienced employees. At the same time he's looking for his missing brother. 
Personality Traits: Ambitious and handsome.
Strengths/Talents: good use sword and he is a very insidious
Weaknesses/Inabilities: He is alone and not good use bow                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Appearance (List the extra details of your characters apparance, IE; height & weight): Long hair, green eyes, Height: 178 Weight: 79
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[CheekyNolan 5420]

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