[Denied]Torwi1`s application

[torwi1 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: torwi1

-How old are you?: I am 16 Years old.

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Im from Norway and got the time zone +1 GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I would say i know some english, but if there is smothing i dont understand im just using Google translate.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Im a 15 year old buy. Currently im going to school and my Grades are kk. I like to play PC/PS3 games with my friends and i play tennis as a hoby. When i play games im mostly playing RP or FPS games.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Monday-Friday normaly 5-8 houers a day and in the weekend i can play 6+ houers a day.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: Around 8 Months

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: I know that RP mostly senters around you trying to me another person IG, that you should then try and act and feel like the person you have created.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it will be a challenge because i havent tryied any real RP server yet, without that i think i will have a fun time playing with the other members of Lord of the craft.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on a few server, one of them is Mel-Lenxia. The reason i left there is because somone managed to use a bug to get in to somewhere that the admins called a "vault" that was surounded with Bedrock. When they managed to get in they stole all wath i had worked to get for 2 months, so i lost the spirit in playing there.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I have read the rules and i Agree

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Human, Dwarf and Orc. I heard somthing about Undead.

-How did you hear about us?: I were searching for a new server to play on, trying to look for one with RP and this server looked promesing.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: torwi1

In-Character:

-Character Name: Tord Stafanger

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography: Tord grew up in a small village far from the large towns, he was raised at a small farm that supplied most of the villagers food. Even if his family had been farmers for a few generations he never liked it, he though it all went to slow.

So when he had to he did it with a smile, just to make his parents happy. Because Tord wanted to see some more action he joined the militia at the age of 15, where he learned the art of the sword and bow.He also learned a little bit a reading and writing from a veteran soldier that had been in the large cities and learned to read and write. Just after a small amount a time Tord proved to have some talent in sword fighting, but his skill with the bow could be improved.

Because Tord worked in the militia and should work in his families farm he decided do try something else to get some money to the family because they weren’t exactly rich, but they wasn’t really poor either. So he enlisted for a part time job for the local miners who was known for their good knowledge about the minerals, here Tord learned the different types of minerals Coal, Iron, Gold, Redstone, Lapis Lazuli and Diamond and how to carefully get the maximum amount of useful material out of them. Tord learned fast and liked mining much more then farming because he could always have a chance to find some of the rare gold or other interesting things instead of just farming crops.

At the age of 17 there moved in a 3 more families to the town, when they came Tord was eager to help them build a house, for the town it was common to help new town members to build their home and Tord liked to help.

After a few years Tord was at the age of 23. That’s when he decided to get some more adventures to his life, so he took his trusted sword, the pickaxe he got from the miners and a few coins and left for a new and adventurous life.

-Character Age: 23

-Character Appearance: Medium long brown hair, Blue eyes, beard and Normaly leather clothing.

-Character Personality: This arent my word, but im looking to make this sort of character.

Quietly forceful, original, and sensitive. Tend to stick to things until they are done. Extremely intuitive about people, and concerned for their feelings. Well-developed value systems which they strictly adhere to. Well-respected for their perserverence in doing the right thing.

-Your ambitions: To wrok hard and try to start a new life. After getting some sort of income he would like to help others to start new lifes and mayby learn them his visons on life at the same time.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes, he knows a bit a reading and writing. He learned this from a veteran soldier that had been to the lage cities and had learned some reading and writing himself.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, he had a part time job working in a mine.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes,he have helpt build a few houses for the new families that moved to the village.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes

-Enjoy Farming?: Not realy, takes to long time.

-Does your character have any special skills?: No.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: No, dont thing i got anything more to say ;)

[IcyHot 1]

I remember you from mel =p Just a helpful hint make your bio a lot longer and in more detail or it will be denied ;O Hope you see this before a staff looks at it so you don't need to wait 2 days. Plus you need to post your MC name there in that top slot even if your app has your name in it.

[torwi1 0]

KK, thx ;)

I remeber you to IcyHot :grin:

[IcyHot 1]

Also what they told me is to make the Bio in paragraphs to make them more organized ;) Good luck

[torwi1 0]

Thx Icy :)

I do hope i get inn :unsure:

[Mercius 15]

Denied.

This arent my word, but im looking to make this sort of character.

Quietly forceful, original, and sensitive. Tend to stick to things until they are done. Extremely intuitive about people, and concerned for their feelings. Well-developed value systems which they strictly adhere to. Well-respected for their perserverence in doing the right thing.

As nice as it is of you to admit this, your entire application needs to be in your own words. We can't accept an app that has elements of plagiarism. We also need to be able to check your spelling and grammar and your ability to roleplay effectively.

It's important that your spelling and grammar is adequate on this server. Relying on Google Translate for some lines just isn't going to work. And please don't copy and paste paragraphs from other websites!