taser7's app

[taser7 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: taser7

-How old are you?: 17

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: -7 GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: No, not really.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I try to get along with everyone, and have fun. While I am not the best RPer, I will try to make the best out of my abilities.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: At least 7+

-How long have you played minecraft?: 6 months

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: What I know about roleplaying is that it changes between games and ERP is hilarious sometimes. I've roleplayed since 2009 on and off. Examples would be of WoW, GW, D&D, and other minecraft servers.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Greatest thing since sliced bread.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Something with Plague in it's name, Old World, Buxville, and Herocraft comes to mind. I left them because they got stale or just had a rotten community.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes, and I've only read lore on Dwarves and Humans so far.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Elves, Orcs, Humans, and Dorfs.

-How did you hear about us?: Friend

-Did you vote?: I'll vote as soon as I turn this in, so yes.

-What was your favourite Law?: Combat/fighting within city limits (excluding pre-approved gladiatorial arenas) is a punishable offense under Kingdom Law. I hate city gankers.

-What was your least favourite Law?: The no X-ray allowed law. Not really. But seriously, I see all the rules as fair so there is no least favorite I'd say.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? It will be Taser7

In-Character:

-Character Name: Jarvis Krastov II

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: taser7

-Biography: Jarvis grew up in a small village on the northern foothills of a mountain unknown to most outsiders. He liked to stand out amongst the other children and adults. He believed everyone should give him their respect and praise his name, though he bears nothing special about him. He had a good relationship with the village elder because of his attitude. He would pull stunts and pranks just to gain recognition. However, these his acting out is other wise harmless to others.

Fast forwarding to around the age of 19, his father had died after a dangerous hunt which he and his fellow hunters from an unknown cause, his body was just found on the ground. Jarvis' mother was having a hard time supporting the both of them leading Jarvis with a will to start a life of adventure. He left with only his golden armor that his father prized, a stone sword, and a some rations. He has set a quest in his mind to show the world that he can be the hero that this world needs.

At age 23, Jarvis was at a bar where he was drunk out of his mind. There he met a Dwarf,conflicted with a bar fight between him and a Dwarf. They were both kicked out, but became fast friends when they sobered up, the Dwarf more damp than sober. The Dwarf's name is Gilloren Knurhiem. Jarvis refers to him as his sidekick. There was a lot more bar fights in the next 4 years between him and the Dwarf.

Jarvis has helped out a few towns from his 8 years of adventure now. From simply gathering wood (or any material) to fighting someone, or something off. However, he will boast about his glories a lot towards others before helping people, and after he helps. He means no harm, he just seeks attention and doesn't see a better way to get his reputation up as an adventurer.

-Character Age: 27

-Character Appearance: Long black hair, with somewhat pasty white skin. He tends to wear his golden armor where ever he goes. He is 6'1" and usually has a fist to his side with a strong posture and his chest sticking out.

-Character Personality: He is a cocky and conceited person. He would believe that people should be honored to be in his presence. He is spoiled, haughty, and altogether undeserving of the respect or even friendships he may acquire. However, he always tried to do the right thing although in a bad mannered way. Perhaps we may see a change in his attitude in these days to come.

-Your ambitions: Jarvis' ambition is to gain respect from all races equally, and be a symbol of hope and pride amongst his people.

-Can your character read or write?: He can read and write, and a little bit of Dwarven the Dwarven language because of Gilloren.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, he has gone mining with Gilloren a few times. He would rather hire people to do so for him though.

-Are you a capable builder? Only mud huts, he knows how to make a quick shelter for when it gets dark out. Other wise he has others build for him, Gilloren comes to mind.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, a life of an adventurer means for him to live by the blade. His sword is his life in the wild and the shield for his people.

-Enjoy Farming?: No, but he likes watching people farm for him if possible.

-Does your character have any special skills?:] His special skill is fighting, drinking, and getting in bad situations with girls.

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[taser7 0]

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[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

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Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Powergaming [ ]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [X]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

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-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

It seems like your application makes your character love violence and cause pointless fights everywhere. Please add a backstory to as why your character does what he does to add depth to the biography.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.

[taser7 0]

My character is not violent or causes fights for no reasons outside of the bar. I would hardly say that counts as being a villain, the bar fights happen because he gets drunk and something happen. Other wise he is peaceful, while snooty, to others. You could say he is a good-willed adventurer that is stuck up.

I have modified my biography as suggested anyway however in hopes of making things clear.