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Minecraft Account Name:zacmaat

How old are you?:14 years old

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:eastern united states

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes I think I fairly do

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Im an average teenager who lives to play games with friends

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I could be online 4 days a week and 2 hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is something that you pretent to be. It's a character you invented. You always stay in character.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I played on minecraft server and watched shadow of israphel.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Not using your roleplaying characters methods or past. You wouldn't call people by their roleplaying name.

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In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Doing something your character wouldn't be able to phically do. Also killing NPC sand players without good reason.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it to be fun and exciting with a new experience.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I didn't leave any servers and I play on my cousins server and two other servers. Antares, and Project Zombie.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes, I promise.

How did you hear about us?: I saw your trailer video on youtube, and I showed my cousin it.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: Yes I have another app. Link- http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/50060-zacmaats-application/

In-Character:

Character Name: Zachary Douglas

What Race are you?: I'm a human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): None.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Age- 21, Weight-160 pounds, Hair Color-Brown, and last, Eye color- Brown. It all started when I was born in Oren. My mother died from giving birth to my little brother, Erik. My father works in an Inn. We always lived at the top of the moutian, but Erik and I's farm was at the bottom of the Moutian.

One day, my father had to go fish at Whisper Isles. When he was fishing, bandits attacked him horribly, and he died. Another day, we heard the news from a solider on what happened. Erik and I were shocked and heartbroken. What we did next was we joined the Military in WinterFell.

One day, all the soldiers woke up and the general of the army was named One eyes Willy. He had to tell us to get prepared. "Why would we get prepared?!" I asked. "We are getting prepared for the biggest battle you will ever fight." He responed. Later, We went to fight undead at snowyfields.

Hours later, the war was almost over. I fought through waves, and waves of undead. I finally turned around and I saw something that I will never forget. My general was obliterated by a fireball. In shock, the war finally ended.

What is your Character's ambitions?: fight for his country

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): The diamond sword is my favorite tool because it inflicts the most damage and I used it in the battle of winterfell.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? ability to lead others and sword fighting

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character: Independent, and a good adventurer.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

As Zachary explored the cloud temple he hears screaming."Help help someone!"Zachary peaked his head around the wall, he saw the halfling being mugged he drew his sword and quietly slit the warrior's neck.The other one was to slow to react the next thing he knew his head fell to the ground."Thank you sir would you like a porkchop?""Yes thank you friend!"Zachary was then on his way.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

"Hello sir do you have any torches I may buy today im off exploring caves again""Hey kid im selling these half price but Only if you dont tell no one mate.""HELL NO"He runs to the nearest guard post and reports the illegal dealer.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

As night falls Zachary ran into a shed.Before he goes to sleep he checks the chest.He sees iron bars enough to make some nice armor.Inside he knows what is right he puts the bars down goes to sleep wakes up in the morning and walks away with a warm feeling in his heart.Then he trys to find iron bars in caves for armor but instead finds diamonds.....

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Night arose across the land zachary starving and lost comes across a a trading camp."Good sir please let me buy food!""Yes me mate for fifty minas ill give you a side of apples""Fifty minas! I can't do that please sir im gonna starve to death "Fine there be a loaf of bread for ye"said the clerk."Thanks be to you"The next moning as zachary left early in his shadow there was a thank you note"

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

As zachary draws his sword from his belt he meets up with friendly guards.The plan is to split archer flank and hit them on top of trees while swords men hit from the front.As zachary and other brave guards attacked bandits were being peppered by arrows.after half an hout later of fighting the battle ended with the bandit leader in the jail zachary had his award given to him he gave half of it to the guards and the rest for spending money for traveling and eating.

[Thu'um 530]

Please reapply in 24 hours.

Your application was denied for:

- Your Metagaming Definition is Incorrect.

- Your Powergaming Definition is Incorrect.

- Your Application Contains Various grammar errors.

- Your Open Response Questions Could use some work.

Overall, the structure of your ORQ's needs a lot of work. Examine your response here. It is very hard to determine who is saying what and what is going on;

"Hello sir do you have any torches I may buy today im off exploring caves again""Hey kid im selling these half price but Only if you dont tell no one mate.""HELL NO"He runs to the nearest guard post and reports the illegal dealer.

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Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

As night falls Zachary ran into a shed.Before he goes to sleep he checks the chest.He sees iron bars enough to make some nice armor.Inside he knows what is right he puts the bars down goes to sleep wakes up in the morning and walks away with a warm feeling in his heart.Then he trys to find iron bars in caves for armor but instead finds diamonds.....

No where in that scenario does it talk about a cave or diamonds. Simply state what your character would do during that specific scenario.

[Thu'um 530]

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