Drago1128's Application

[Drago1128 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Drago1128

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:EST United States

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes, Fluent, but not that good at spelling, if i mess up at spelling i always correct myself, if it means alot i will take my time, just becasue of rp

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:With my friends, not in an official server

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:Friend

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:None

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:Yes, right after i post this it shall be up (should be up now)

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Taking control of a character, and using it in a factasy world, where you decide what happens

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: If you know something your character should not know. And take it to and take it to your advantage. Like seeing a persons real ign, and not using their roleplay name.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting is when a person plays as a power hungry overload who cannot fail. Like someoone who has the best armor in the game, and cannot die, or the player will not let him/her die of natural causes

In-Character Details

Character Name:Drago

Character Race:Human

Character biography: Drago was born in human civilization. He Was raised in it. Along with His 3 brothers. When Drago was a young kid, Galador a young elf and Drago were best friends.

His father died when he was 13, along with one of his 3 brothers. His mom took care of him, But ironically at age 16 His mother died,His brothers moved away and left drago, Drago had no choice

But to become a Guard for his local city. After a 4 years he became the captain of the guard, for about 5 years. But one day 3 men rode into town and took all of his belongings.

And told lies to the king, and residents of the city, Drago was stripped of his ranks and had no choice but to run away from his city at age 25, he went to go live with his best friend Galador.

Together they lived deep in the woods and hunted off of trees with their bows, Drago became very skilled with his bow, but still very trained with his sword, at age 28 Galador and drago moved in with the dwarfs

to learn their fighting syles and learned to fight with a axe. Drago then moved out of being with galador and tried to find his 2 brothers, after 3 years or searching he had no prevail.

Galador and Drago now have met up again and are ready to take on the dangourous world together.

What are your characters ambitions?:To become a king, Emporer, Or just to rule the rule the world.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://imgur.com/AwoRw

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?: In aethor, A powerful human city, where Drago comes to trade, gamble, and train, he stumbles across a young dwarf, This young dwarf

is poor, trying to sell minor stuff at his stand. I go up to the young dwarf merchant, "Hello Young dwarf, What wares are you selling today?" Says Drago. "Well nothing much, some fruit, a poorly forged sword, some damaged armor-" The dwarf is cut off. "Hmm i'll buy the fruit and the sword,'Hands the dwarf 200 coins". "200 Coins!?" "It only cost 50 you know, right?" "Yes i do, you are young, and should learn some people do good things," Drago walks away.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?: Drago would take out his sword

and defeat the Orc, you may ask "How can he take out an orc so easyily"? Well drago has been trained in bows, swords, and axes, And is very efficient at combat, taking down an orc is no challenge for him.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: As walking down the road to Malinor Drago finds that an old man is passing by, Drago was going ot say hi, but before he could even say anything, the old mans falls.

Drago is horrified by this and hurries to the old man. "are you O.k?" Asked Drago. "Yes, yes i am fine, may you go fetch me another walking stick?" asked the old man.

"sure" Drago heads out into the woods, collects a stick, and comes back. The old man is gone, before drago knew it he was hit on the head with a large stick. Drago then falls to the ground, and is now, knocked out.

When drago woke up he was on the road still, coins still in his pocket, his weapons still with him. Nothing has gone wrong. He finds the old man still asleep behind him. Drago wonders, if the old mans knocked out, who knocked us out... then heads to the old man.

"you awake?" The man wakes up "Hmm, where am I, who are you," after a long silence the old man replys to himself. "Oh your the man who was going to help me get a new stick, and i was walking down the road, Who attacked us?"

"I don't know" replied Drago. But i'm sure we'll find out soon.

Last Application: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/72050-drago1128s-application/page__p__584991#entry584991

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

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Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

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Out of Character:

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Role Play:

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-Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [ ]

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-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ]

-Unreal Scenarios [ ]

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Conflicting Answers [ ]

Character is Cliche [ ]

Requires a Villain Application [ ]

Open Ended Responses Require Elaboration [X]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [X]

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Cliche [ ]

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Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

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-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

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Other Comments:

Firstly, your biography is lacking in any indication of lore knowledge. Please be advised, in order to join our server, some knowledge of lore must be presented to prove that you have understood and are accommodated to our server's adage. Please read the lore on the website, forums, and/or the wiki to take a glimpse of what our server has done for the past year. Then, implement some lore knowledge that is valid such as city names, nations, and large scale events. Also, please be advised that all lore that is /current/ must pertain to Asulon, not Aegis. Having your character being born from old cities is fine, but be aware that all current adventures your character will embark upon will be in Asulon.

Here are some useful links:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=10

Secondly, I would like you to improve your Open Response Questions. They require further elaboration, such as character dialogue, your character's emotions, what they are thinking, etc. This will indubitably aid in the progression of your application. Be aware that every scenario will be seen at an in-game approach, so no powergaming or metagaming is allowed. The lore included (if you so happen to include some) must also be applicable to our server as well.

For example, try adding some actions and explanation as to how you take down the Orc in the second ORQ. Give indepth details, giving insight on every sword stroke and strike.

Also, I would try relating the currency in the first ORQ to ones relatable to the currency of Asulon; e.g. Minas.

I wish you good luck on your next application!

Thanks, and goodluck on your next application!

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If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account! <3

You come to Asulon to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.

Definition of Metagaming and Powergaming : http://sm-rp.forumotion.com/t32-powergaming-metagaming-ic-and-ooc

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