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I recommend re-reading the definitions of metagaming and powergaming (which can be found at these links metagaming, powergaming. A good way to prove you know the definitions of these two would be through using examples.
Your backstory a wonderful length, and well written though it appears you are lacking two (2) mandatory pieces of lore that match up with history of Arcas. You can refer to the wiki page for more information.
Your character design is well done, but the only issue would have to be the bright coloured hair. It is quite unrealistic in this time period for a person to have such neon coloured hair. Please change the colour of your hair to something more natural.
If you require any assistance feel free to PM me or add me on discord and contact me at armajesty#5043.
The wiki page has loads of important lore that can be used to help you improve your character’s backstory. You are also welcome to join our New Player Discord where you can contact other community staff, ask questions as well as speak with other new members!