marimbamonk

*Drakinroth sees the ancient writing across the board, and widens his eyes in amazement.* "Lats," he says, "I nub write dis."

I knew this lat wud gifted.

Written in 3rd person* Various orcs and humans wandered throughout the kingdom of Salvus, gathering goods, defending from bandits, and "klomping" soldiers. Little did they know, a mysterious figure entered the newly appointed Orcish barracks and left within a flash. Scrawled in crude blood across the wall was a disgusting message, made from some primal and unknown language. But one word stood out. Drakinroth. The figure left the city from a back way and never spoke a word. But whoever -- whatever -- he was; he was possessed...

Even if I don't win, I'm very happy looking at the list of people who will outvote me. :)

You application was... Here's what you need to fix: • Your definition of powergaming is incorrect. • Your biography needs to be longer, and have more background. How did you get "clothes you killed yourself"? Where does this copper mask come in? And why was your family burned down? Elaborate on these things. • Your answer to the bandit scenario had hints of powergaming. • We can't open attachments (as far as I know). You'll have to upload it to a site and then put it into your actual application. Fix the problems mentioned above and you'll have a much better chance at getting accepted! PM me if you have any questions. Please reapply after 48 hours.

A very good read sir. Continue writing. You are great at it.

I nominate: Danny. DanielJamieson97

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Your application has been... Here's what you need to fix: • Your definition of meta-gaming is incorrect, and your definition of power-gaming could use some elaboration. • Harryarryson isn't a valid role-play name. Please add a space and capitalize it. • Your entire biography could use elaboration. Why did you have no family? Why did you join the army? Your biography needs to have more length too. • Both of your scenario answers could be longer. • The link to your skin doesn't work, but we aren't going to email you. Please find another way to upload it. Fix the problems mentioned above and you'll have a much better chance at getting accepted! PM me if you have any questions. Please reapply after 48 hours.

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Your application has been... ACCEPTED! Wait for a GM to implement you.

Moved to Accepted Forum

Your application to LoTC has been... ACCEPTED! Wait for a GM to implement you.

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You and your application have been... You have plagiarized from the following application: Brokk Da Butcha's Application Your Minecraft account has been banned from being whitelisted into the server. Nice try.

Your application is... You would have been accepted, but here's what you need to fix: • The link to you skin does not work. Fix the problem I mentioned above as soon as possible, or you will eventually be denied. PM me or another application team member when you are finished/have questions.

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Your application to LoTC was... Here's what you need to fix: • Your biography could be a bit more spaced out. It was hard to read that cramped wall of text. • You state that your character was "promoted to warrior". This would be considered powergaming. You're giving yourself a trait which you have not earned in-game yet. • I can't see any character progression. You character went to war for a while, and came back to become an adventurer. I want to know what happened in between, and what inspired some of the decisions you made. • Your answer to the bandit scenario implicates that you need a villain application. Although, if you word it correctly, you could kill the elf, the way you worded it does not give you permission. Also, your overall answer had hints of powergaming. Fix the problems mentioned above and you'll have a much better chance at getting accepted! PM me if you have any questions. Please reapply after 48 hours.

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Your application to LoTC was... Here's what you need to fix: • Your definition of metagaming is incorrect. • Your name doesn't match the lore. You are not a ninja. • The biography is meant as a biography of your character, not a way to boast about how you can give him and make him whatever you want. This would ruin the role-play of the server. • This is not the Lord of the Rings. There is no Black Star, and no Middle Earth. • Your biography currently makes you require a Villain Application. • Why are you a "ninja"? • You must have an age. You cannot just "pick" one "whenever you want". • "Blending in with the sun because you are the daytime ninja" is considered powergaming. • All of your answers to all questions could use elaboration. Why do you want to do this or that? Fix the problems mentioned above and you'll have a much better chance at getting accepted! PM me if you have any questions. Please reapply after 48 hours.

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Your application to LoTC was... ACCEPTED! Please wait for a GM to implement you.

Your application to LoTC is... I would have denied you, but your character is so unique, I'm giving you a lucky chance. Fix these things: • Your answer to the bandit scenario could be considered powergaming. Think, if this happened in the land of Asulon. Please answer this more like, "X attempts to help Y" or "X attempts to....". • The link to your skin is broken. Fix it please. Once you do these things, I will be glad to accept you. Unfortunately, if you can't fix these things in a hasty amount of time, I (or another A Team member) will have to deny you. PM me or another A Team member once you are done.

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