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Trazier

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  1. Very very close. 1: Your skinshot was not in visible format. Please make use of the attachments feature on the forums, or upload it to imageshack and use the commands to display it here. 2: Your definitions of meta and powergaming are a bit... weird. Your definition of powergaming is more akin to the definition of min-maxing, and your definition of metagaming is more akin to the definition of powergaming. Since metagaming and powergaming are such anathema to the RP environment, applicants must have a solid foundation of understanding what they are in order to avoid them. Fix these two errors and i'd be more than willing to accept you. Also, since they are small errors, and your app is NOT complete crap, i'm not going to force you to sit for 2 days before reapplying. If you correct these issues before 2 days pass, I will personally waive the 48 hour rule and accept you myself.
  2. Denied, reasons being... 1: You didn't vote for the server. You should really do this, even to show that you're serious about making this a better place by being a roleplaying force. That's how you can help the server out in another fashion. 2: Your skinshot was not in a visible format. Please make use of the attachments feature, or upload it to imageshack and [img/img] it here. 3: Powergaming in your 'what if' scenarios. You seemed to have an enchanted instrument that can play magical melodies to stun opponents. That is unacceptable.
  3. I really want to deny your app, because you didn't vote (And it's such a tiny tiny thing, and does so much for the server) but I can't as in all honesty, the rest of your app was flawless. If I found even one other little thing wrong with it, I would've denied it and listed not voting as one of the reasons. Seriously though, just go vote. They even give little 100 mina bribes/incentives to people. It could help you get some starting cash, but you should vote just because the server doesn't FORCE you to vote like other ones. All in all, I hope to encounter you in the realms, because I know you'll be an asset to roleplaying. Welcome to ansulon.
  4. Denied. First of all, your biography was a bit... powergamey. Your character is just born, and suddenly is living off the lands. Not to mention that he acquires a bow, creates 4 arrows, and uses them to slaughter an entire camp of orcs. 2: Your 'what if' scenario answers. Why would the bandits be calling your character 'ye muggle' for interfering? This is not world of harry potter, and I doubt the bandits were aspiring magi, that they would use 'muggle' in a derogatory term.
  5. Denied. Your previous app (which shows 'yesterday' as the time of posting it) was denied, and there is a 48 hour waiting period between reapplications. Please try again tomorrow or the next day.
  6. Some areas you could use work... 1: Voting. The server doesn't ask much, but one day's worth of your 'voting rights' from minestatus is a pretty small price to ask. You aren't required to vote every day, but the whole "Naah, i ain't played here and I don't feel like it unless I see it and like it" strikes me as needlessly uppity. I suppose you could explore around as a wandering soul, and then if you like what you see, it may be worth your vote and reapplication. 2: Your definition of powergaming was borderline. It's almost to what I would expect of 'min-maxing'. This is a rather small flaw, but it's there. A tip: Powergaming isn't just about your character. 3: Your application is almost there. I'm going to waive the 48 hour wait period in case you want to send out a single vote, and maybe re-update your definition of powergaming. Like I said, you're -- this close to having an acceptable app.
  7. This application is denied. The areas you need improvement... 1: Your definition of powergaming, while maybe applicable if you google the term, is not what we're looking for here. Your definition is more akin to 'min-maxing'. 2: Your skinshot is not in an easily visible format. Please make use of the 'attachments' feature if you decide to make another application. You may also upload to imageshack and [img/img] it here. 3: Your biography is attrocious, and loaded with powergaming (You need a better definition of powergaming anyway, so here's a place to start looking). An elf abandoned at 5 years old would be like a human baby thrown into a dumpster at 5 months old. It will not grow up into a fierce warrior, it will die and that will be the end of it's story.
  8. Application denied: Where you need improvement... 1: In one place you say you understand well the concept of english and grammar, but then one sentence down you're using emoticons and shorthand in your answers. y u do that 4? It gets you denied. 2: Your definitions of power/metagaming. Your definition of powergaming was more akin to the definition of min/maxing, where one strives to put in minimum effort, but get maximum stats/power/etc. in place of it. 3: If you need a definition of powergaming, just look at your character's biography. It's basicly powergaming from the first letter to the last period. 3a: If you do reapply, please make use of the 'attachments' section ,to upload your skinshot in an easily visible format. It's not fair to expect me to do work/research in order to see what you look like, don'tchathink?
  9. Denied. Places where you could use improvement... 1: The biography. It seems unusual a city would hire a <10 year old into the guard force in order to clear out dangerous arachid enemies. 2: And most grieviously, your skinshot was not in a visible format. Please make use of the 'attachments' area in order to put it there, or upload it to imageshack or something.
  10. I was under the impression they were not allowing multiple accounts(Too many OOC benefits, including stashing money/items on them for safekeeping), has this changed?
  11. 1: Biography is incomplete in places, and slightly powergamey in others. Why was your character and his family living in elven lands? Who was teaching you to become a shaman? Certainly not the elves. 2: Your skinshot is not in a visible format. Correct these issues, and it should be allright, but for the moment, this is denied. Please repost in 2 days if you're still interested.
  12. 1: Biography was a bit short and ... odd. It's a take on the old "ORC BANTIDZ KILLED MI PARENTS + I R ORPHAN!!!" I see so much of, but it's a bit different... I'm not sure if elves execute their own kind being how difficult it is for them to procreate initially. Also, as elves live hundreds and hundreds of years, being a 19 year old elf is akin to being a 2-3 year old human child. It's unlikely your character wears dry pants at that age, let alone is a master archer and all that other stuff you wrote down. 2: Your skinshot question was simply bypassed. That's an express trip to the denied category.
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