Trazier

1: I don't know why you copy/pasted the app 3 times. 2: You might want to go to the wiki and look up the lore. You said your character is a high elf that's 2.5 feet tall. There are no two-foot elves in the land. I think you're under the impression that high-elf equals pixie/faerie/leprechaun. 3: Your skinshot is not in visible form. Use the full editor and put it directly into your app, or put it on imageshack or some other widely known similiar site, then it to your post here.

I liked your app. There's just one thing wrong with it, the screenshot. Please use the full editor feature and upload it onto the forums so it will be displayed in your post, or if you can't do that for some reason, post it on imageshack or some other well-known similiar site, then it on here. Also, too many elipses! An elipses is the '...' people use so often when writing. I'm not denying you for that, i'm just saying I thought you used a lot of them. You get bonus points for putting the journey from aegis to ansulon in your character biography. I really liked that. Just get a skinshot into your post and I think you'll be ready to go. (I'm not going to deny this app just yet, i'm giving you a couple days to edit in a visible skinshot, so you don't have to re-write this whole thing, as 99.5% of it was perfect)

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Please space out that hideous wall of colored text. I'm not even going to try and seperate it myself because I think you should be responsible for the work on your app.

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1: Skinshot not visible. Clicking the link was broken, and is terribly suspect. www.minecraft...../myfirstskin/, usually that '.......' means something more, but no, that's exactly what your link leads to. Keylogger sites usually do stuff like that, and i'm really hoping that isn't what's going on here. I hope you just input it incorrectly and that's how it came out. 2: Your definitions of powergaming/metagaming need work. 3: Your biography is painfully short.

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You're really, really close. I actually liked your biography, and usually that's where i'm telling people they need to put in more effort. 1: Your definition of powergaming needs work. It's a word that can have a couple definitions, but the one you gave I think applies more to 'powergrinding' or 'min-maxing'. 2: Your skinshot was not visible. I even clicked the link and I got a bunch of 404 file not found and additional errors on the page. It might be better to just imbed it into your post or if necessary, put it on imageshack then put the /img in here.

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"What is your race: White" Sorry, I had to chuckle at this. They mean race in the game, not what kind of human are you. Your biography is also really short and doesn't set up much of a backstory for your character. Your definitions of meta/powergaming also could use some work on them.

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Your app is very...verbose, but there's a few places it needs work. Basicly the whole biography is rubbish. You can't be a king/lord/descendant of some long-lost/not-yet-discovered/hidden-from-normal-sight secret island kingdom. Now you could alter some of it, make your home village a known one in the world, even if it's one you don't plan to live in. You could say you're from the (use your race) kingdom of (only humans have multiple kingdoms right now, but you get the point), and maybe say you're an adventurer or whatever, and go from there. Remember, you're here to write the tale of your character through RP and interactions, you don't come into the world with all this awesome power you've gained from fighting many wars in your long-lost kingdom. Also your screenshot of your skin... what is it? It looks like a white commando guy with an ammo bandolier around his chest, but it also looks like his arms are severed at the elbows. I'd suggest acquiring a new skin if/when you remake your application.

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Nor will you be playing on the server. Good day.

Oh, an area, hmm? I was honestly just going to go with whatever i could get or maybe terraform something into something else, but I could start looking around too. Basicly I wasn't picky, and was just wanting anything I could get my hands on. I'll have to wander around a bit later and try to select a spot that looks like it could use a bit of hospitality. Maybe a bit beyond the 'newbie camps' where folk are allowed to get a bit of wood and make a few things before heading out and looking for a nation. I haven't gone looking for those yet, so I don't know how far they spread out from the actual temple area. I think it's kind of already townsized. Also, i'm unsure of where this town is. I have heard though it's possible to combine two diamond donators and turn it into a city plot. 100x100 is much bigger than 40x40. Is this city a donator plot or did people save up actual cash for it? Perhaps something could be worked out (if allowed) where we combine our two town plots and turn it into a bigger city plot. 100x100 is pretty big for just two people though. How many people are in this town? What kingdom is it located in? 100x100 has a lot of room to build houses, an inn, maybe a shop, a greenhouse, tool shed, etc. etc. It'd be interesting to have actual people in the inn. There were only ever 3 permanent residents, and one of em only stayed a month. The thing is though, I kinda wanted some of the land to be a 'nature preserve' so to speak. There might be some stuff built under it, but I didn't just want every square inch of the place to be cobblestone streets and giant buildings. I imagined people wandering around the road seeing a sign for it, then maybe a road forking off from the main road, heading down a path, maybe through a little forest, then bang... the inn.

Scrolls, obviously. Sure, only mages can CAST magic, but strong mages can also create arcana to either be given to others to be used, or carried by the mage themselves to be used without draining themselves of whatever energy they would drain with a normal cast. Think magic rings, scrolls, we already have potions, and the like.

Well, I got my hopes up, but i'm still waiting to hear something on it.

Technically it brought about the destruction of the undead, and the unstoppable rampage of an Iblees released from whatever it was that kept him in check originally. Also, Calamity is meh, I prefer Cataclysm.

Here's hoping it gets approved and maybe expands someday... And if it happens to be near what i'd like to get... perhaps they could join together, or maybe have trade relations or something.

Moved to Cloud Temple Charters. The monks have a long history of helping the less fortunate, perhaps they will smile upon a project, such as this.

It's technically a town plot, which is what diamond donators get, and to build it anywhere but in the wilds(which would destroy the whole concept of it), needs a charter. I put this up here thinking maybe one of the nations or even one of the newly formed nations would see the potential in having this in their territory, but so far the lack of interest has me extremely disappointed.

Well, I thought i'm only really giving up if I don't actually make the effort to do this, so here it is. I'm looking to rebuild ark's end here on ansulon. For anyone unaware of ark's end on aegis, it was that inn right off the road between whispering isles and kramaroe/galahar. It was one of the oldest buildings in aegis. It featured free rooms/food/a bath, and there was a bar serving customers as well. So, if any nation will have us, I offer to pay tithe or tax be it in currency, food, or gathered goods. All i'll require is my diamond plot somewhere near a travelled road. It doesn't have to be smack-dab in the middle of the road from the cloud temple, but I wouldn't object to that either. I'd even settle for a sign and a road leading from the main road to this place, so that people would know it was there. If possible i'd like it somewhat around halfway between the temple and whatever kingdom accepts us, as this is where people are most likely to be vulnerable and in need, and might find an inn a welcome comfort. TOWN CHARTER MC Name: Trazier RP Name: Same Town Name: Ark's End Why are you/your character starting this town? What role will it play? A desire to reclaim what was lost with the destruction of Aegis. I seek to again have an inn where travellers pop in from time to time, either for a snack, a few mugs, or maybe a room for the night. It will have the side-effect of generating food and income to whatever kingdom accepts it. What type of political system is enforced in this town? Is this town under the reign of any other nation at this time? Political status is basic morality. You behave. If you don't, the owner(s) or staff tell you to get lost. If you don't, things can go badly. If you do, feel free to come back another time when you're less angry/drunk/whatever you did wrong. This town was once a part of Oren, but that all burned up with the other world. What sort of behavior will residents exhibit? (Race relations, nation relations, etc.) Friendly, likely to the point of being taken advantage of. Has no problem with anyone who doesn't have a problem with it. Treats others as it is treated. Where would you prefer the town’s region be? Including a screenshot of the land would be nice (of game or map). Well, I personally would love to have it on a praerie just because I like that land, but on Aegis it was built into a hill and had a forest growing on top of it. Any other details (architecture, races, culture, etc): It would be a pretty big shame if this was unable to be reborn on ansulon. The very concept of this place means building it out in the wilds a million miles away from anyone would simply destroy it before it even begins. Players who have agreed to sign this charter (15 name minimum): My Myself I Trazier Arkensald(if he ever returns) Tylerisbored (he said he would, and didn't even want a house here... just need a dozen of those now) And that's about it If there's a nation that thinks a prosperous inn inside it/somewhat on the outskirts would be a good thing, please feel free to message me or something. It's been a rough few months. And on the nearly-zero chance that more than one nation would want me working there, first come, first served. I'd be just as happy in an orcish desert as i would a dwarf cave as I would an elven forest or a nice grassland somewhere...

I remember those two... salvus it is I guess.

Could someone remind me which of them was formerly alkhazar in oren? Once they took alkhazar, I didn't really do much except watch the eventual march they made to the cloud temple. I didn't go find another kingdom to move into as a refugee, because as I rightly suspected with how easily they took alkhazar, all other kingdoms were going to fall in a similiar fashion, and they sure did. So where am I supposed to go now? None of these human kingdoms i've heard names of, sound anything like what I was once a part of. A bit of a pointer in the right direction could help.

Kronars, Lirums, Dokoras, or maybe just use metals... ex: Coppers, silvers, golds, platinums, etc. Shame all our previously acquired money and things are all useless in this new world. Sure hope iblees doesn't get told about this place...