Denied
Some Reasons:
-From what I've heard and seen, shades aren't the way you have portrayed them and I do not believe that you waving a sword would scare one
-Your character doesn't portray the attributes of a Cleric in the way he deals with situations
Pros:
-You show excellent ability to RP in your app and, if you are serious about joining, will be able to make an acceptable app easily I think.