Agith

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Denied Biography needs work Open ended responses need work Simply putting in "Kills them" is unacceptable for example.

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Denied Reformat the application properly, it is difficult to read ( Put the words furthest out of the brackets, not in them. )

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denied No skin Little effort shown That's not a definition of powergaming and metagaming which is acceptable. Application needs alot of work

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Denied Poor overall application, showing little to no effort. Read the lore Look up the meanings of powergaming and metagaming Post a better image of you're skin

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Denied Still some grammatical errors Seems that the character is unrealistically skilled. IF you were shot in the knee, injuries would be permanent. No character flaws You're one of many players, you will never be the main protagonist.

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Denied You are not the best at anything right off that back, period. Not sure that creating an entire family lore for oren ( Which no longer exists, but that's not you're fault for not knowing just yet) Review you're biography ( Have fun with it! Try to be more original :) ) Grammar needs work Please redefine powergaming as that is not quite what it is ( On the wiki there is a section I do believe. ) Feel free to try again in 48 hours.

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Accepted On one condition, message me some more in depth open ended responses. Now one thing doesn't make much skin, a farmer character completely covered up? ( It's tough work you know, I'd recommend a skin that resembles the facial construction, just with some more opened up clothing) Remember, to be evil you need to apply for it, with a villain application Enjoy you're time on the server.

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Denied Screenshot required Spelling errors Missing portions Poor biography Open ended stories need work No powergaming definition

I would like to put it out there that for one, my name has nothing to with this thread, and Malin is infact named after the elf, and I've had the bloody name for well over 3 months now as well and no one seems to mind it, and I'll not be explaining my reasoning as to why I he is named as such ( However it is a rather odd name since Malin is infact a dwarf ) I would only presume as well that a payment, if it does not have to be mina, would be the aid in the kings health, as well as in other various areas where alchemy is useful.

TOWN CHARTER MC Name: Agith RP Name: Malin Famaen Town Name: Lightforge Sanctuary Why are you/your character starting this town? What role will it play? This is the fiefdom the high alchemist Floop, and his child Malin. It will serve alras by making of potions, as well as a place of study and home to both Malin, as well as Floop. What type of political system is enforced in this town? Is this town under the reign of any other nation at this time? The fiefdom is under the supervision of the Nation of Alras. What sort of behavior will residents exhibit? (Race relations, nation relations, etc.) Within the fiefdom, Floop will be developing new alchemical recipes, as well as making potions from old recipes and improving upon them. This fiefdom will also serve as a home to the family, where Floop will pass down his art unto Malin. Where would you prefer the town’s region be? Including a screenshot of the land would be nice (of game or map). Mediocregamer has already allotted the 40x40 plot. Any other details (architecture, races, culture, etc): The main upper area will look mainly as all other homes in Alras will, victorian in design. It will bear a large laboratory and private area sealed off by a thick door on the surface, within the underground compound will be a small private living area, a vault, and a dome shaped laboratory where Floop will be performing his craft, the depth of the area is to ensure the security of the nation, and prevent any potential disaster from spreading out, Should such a disaster occur. The area may also serve as a panic room to those who may need to find sanctuary should a disaster ever strike Alras. Players who have agreed to sign this charter (15 name minimum): I have been informed this is not needed due to the plot being a Fiefdom. (Thanks to Seventh for aiding me in the charter process)

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Denied Biography needs work Open stories should be more than just one sentence Try again in 48 hours

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Denied Poor grammar Biography needs work Look up the definitions of metagaming and powergaming Open ended stories are poorly done

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Denied Missing scenarios Grammar is flawed Bio needs work ( No undead influence ) Powergaming is the use of force without allowing a chance for the other person to react by the way. Try again in 48 hours

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