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Agith

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  1. Denied GRammar needs work Open ended stories show nothing about the character Bio needs work You never defined metagaming Try again in 48 hours.
  2. Denied The biography is a bit weak. Please feel free to look up what things you don't know Read lore Open descriptions need work.
  3. Denied Re-read lore, this is not a direct knock off of lord of the rings my friend, it is loosely based of of it.
  4. Denied - Definition of powergaming is only partially correct - Put more effort into the biography - TRy to show us more of your character's personality - Snuuk isn't really even a name to be honest.
  5. Accepted However would it be possible to alter your skin a bit to look more like it can be altered for various weather conditions? You can simply put armor on over a bit of light clothing to signify the addition of clothing, while the removal of clothing isn't quite possible.
  6. Denied Do please post a larger screenshot? Please define Powergaming It is a lovely app, though you seemed to have cut off at one point? ""Deal! thank you very much sire" "you're welcome sire" (exscuse me if prices are off i don't really know them yet) "Interesting, my sword has started to " Just adjust these things and we'll be all set! Message me if you'd like some aid and come on back in two days ( Feel free to message me on it ) And we'll get you on your way into the whitelist.
  7. Denied Required to have a screenshot Read lore Learn what metagaming and powergaming are ( Look it up ) Insufficient bio Insufficient proof of roleplay ability The race is for your ingame race... Not your actual race. Over all this app is poor, redo the entire thing with more effort.
  8. Denied PRovide a better screenshot Re-read lore You cannot be an undead right off the back MAgic requires special roleplay Poor bio Bad definition of metagaming Powergaming definition needs work
  9. Denied It is a fairly good application,please expand on your bio Re-read lore ( Golden apples induce severe memory loss to elves ) Try to include more flaws in your character, it's a common problem, and it causes a large imbalance within the server. ( It really isn't a bad app, just needs some work. ) If you have any questions do message me.
  10. Denied You're spelling is not up to par. Please re-read the lore You have no character flaws You're not the main character in this server, try not to pose yourself off as one. And this is a roleplay server, if you don't want to have to roleplay to kill people, then you don't belong here.
  11. Denied Please review the lore Please try to get a skin with eyes Please review the definition of Powergaming. Try to refine your bio a bit more to be more detailed. If you have any further questions, please message me.
  12. Denied Please review the lore Please work on your grammar Extend upon your biography You want to be a dwarf or an elf? If you have any further questions please contact me.
  13. Denied Denied for lack of originality. Duplication of originality No screenshot
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