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  1. ShadowoKing
    Please wait for a gm to implemented you.
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    Under review -Defintion for power-emoting I feel is half explained, add more. -Bio is short, add more details of his life. Could add why he wears the armour, more detail on how he learn his skills. Also need some form of link with our lore like places e.g. -For open response answers they need more detail and few of them have their own problems. First one is power-emoting, killing a person with no effort. Fourth answer requires a VA to slaughter people for unprovoked attack/killing/stealing. Last one needs more detail with more speeches and movements. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
  4. ShadowoKing
    ((Well few members I know of are alive. We are parted, but planning to reform in the future))
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    Denied -Metagaming definition you gave is wrong -bio could be longer, add more detail, things happened e.g. -First answer for Open response questions is lacking much detail than the rest, add more speeches, movements e.g. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply
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    Denied -Roleplaying definition is wrong but on right line -The meaning gave for metagaming is not just about old and new characters. -For power-emoting, missing something that does relate to god mode kinda. -For bio can you add history to your character and where abouts, see no link how he got to Asulon. -I feel the last answer for open response questions need more detail like the first, keep them all in good quality. -Also like to add make the answers not coloured, was having slight difficulty on what is what. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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    Denied -Cannot be Kharajyr, they got their own application system. Get accepted first then make one for Kharajyr Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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  12. ShadowoKing
    Denied -Missed a question: -Bio needs some form of link to our lore like places e.g. -Few of your answers for open response questions need more detail on what your character does. Add more movements and speeches. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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    Denied -Metagaming definition you gave is wrong -Can you go in more detail on what power-emoting, add example. -For bio it got alot of pauses, and needs to be more detailed. Since your character is old how was getting to Asulon was like and adventure there since we only been there for like 49. -theres no link or image of skin. -Your answers for open response questions needs movements from your character and make them feel realistic. Add flaws e.g. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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    Denied -Please use the proper application format from this link: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/57513-offical-server-whitelist-application/ (in the white box) please wait 2 hours to re-apply.
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    Denied -Metagaming defintion you gave is wrong but its on the right line kinda. -For bio feels like its skipping parts, not given the closure or point. Learned skills through these,anything? Also where was this Halfling, need a link of our lore like a place. From your ambitions, tool and talents could explain how got this in your bio. -For Open response questions, two of your answers need more detail. More movements and speeches. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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    Denied -Metagaming and power-emoting are wrong. Power-emoting is about the right lines. -Bio feels like its skipping to parts by parts, you could go more detail on the bio and need some form of link to our lore like places. -For open response questions, your answers are short and need more. Add movements and speeches to your answers, and your answers seem to not relate to what you put for bio. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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  22. ShadowoKing
    Denied -Wrong definition for roleplaying -Need a definition for metagaming and power-emoting, do research and put your own words to what they mean. -Bio needs more detail on what happened to her and need some form of link to our lore like places e.g. -Your skin image was not attached so I could not see. -Your answers for open response questions are too short, add more roleplay to them. Movements, speeches e.g. -Presentation for the application was kinda hard to read. Everything is kinda close together, add spaces in between, add colours e.g. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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    Denied -Know you may be new to these new words (roleplay, metagaming and power-emoting) but try your best to reasearch these. Put proper definitions on what they mean in your words. -Bio is too short need more detail what happened to him and need some form of link to our lore, places e.g. Relating to your skin why does he wear these, something you could add. -Answers for Open response questions need more detail like speeches and more actions from your character. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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