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ShadowoKing

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    -Metagaming need more explaining on what it means. Also not limited to two players. -Bio needs some history of your character to make what he is, why, and include links to our lore like places. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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    -Roleplaying definition for roleplaying is wrong, need more depth. -Bio needs more background information on your character to relate to ambitions and how you got to Asulon. Way is sailing and Undead are gone, try reading more to understand. -We want a skin link, so your skin link is broken. -Answers for open response questions need to be longer, add movements and speeches. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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    Okay problem I find is in bio said you have one weakness, thats powergaming also some open response questions' answers could be more detailed on what he does. Good try, please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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  8. ShadowoKing
    Please wait for a Gm to implemented you.
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  10. ShadowoKing
    -Please use the full format for the application, including adding the questions. -Metagaming and power-emoting are wrong -Bio has to be longer than that, add more history. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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    -Roleplaying and ooc are incorrect, they are on the right line thou. -Did not explain how you could use a sword even thou you are a miner. -could un-colour to make questions and answers apart. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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    Seem to understand our lore, have detailed application and have to say glad to acccept you. Althrough the colours hurt my eyes and difficult to tell whats questions and answers but overall still great. Please wait for a GM to implemented you.
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    -Feel Metagaming need a example. -Bio has no form of link to our lore, add places e.g. can get information from wiki. -Open response questions, answers you gave are too short. Put more detail, add movements and speeches. Not bad just remember cannot make a crime requires a VA. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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    -Roleplaying definition is wrong because not gone into much detail on what it means. -Metagaming and Power-emoting are wrong, reasearch what they mean and required to be answered. -OOC and IC need more longer and detailed if possible. -Larp? Be serious. -Bio requires to be longer, add more history to him, current age e.g. Also add some form of link to our lore, use wiki for help. -Image for skin needs to be picture of it (like you wearing it and screenprint of it). -Missing open response questions. Do not give up, please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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  20. ShadowoKing
    -Bio could be longer, try adding more history to him to turn to person and need some form of link to our lore like places. -First answer for open response questions need to go on more detail on what character does, keep to one route. Add speeches to it as well Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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    -Go in more detail on metagaming, does not explain much. -Bio needs adjusting things happened and the place you said lived, recommend you don't because you need to this IG. So say left. -Few of your answers for open response questions not relate to bio, seem to be changing who you want to be. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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    -Seems some of your actions requires a VA like the torture part in your character's past, but major one is in your answer for open response questions. Cannot just kill people, need actions to put you into fighting. Also got powergaming in your answer. Loose her up, seems to be overpowered. -Your answers for open response questions seems to be lacking, add more to some and detailed like your bio. -In your bio, please remove the undress thing. Relates to sexual stuff, and do not like that. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply, not bad for first try.
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