ShadowoKing

Well done for first attempt, now wait for a GM to implemented you.

Moved to Denied Forum

This is not bad for second attempt just make these adjusts and be alot closer to get accepted depends on who is reviewing: Make your answers for open response questions more detailed like your actions you made, only few need these. But I feel that they all need speeches for better answers and roleplay feel. Do these, third times a charm. Make any other adjustments if you feel you could do better. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

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-Please use our server application format if you wish to enter our server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/57513-official-server-whitelist-application/ (first white box) Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

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-Go in more detail for metagaming, not convince you know what it means. -Power-emoting definition is wrong, research and put in own words. -Bio is good but needs some form of link to our lore, how got here, add places names e.g. -You left out one question in the application, please check application format again to seeing the missing question. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

Moved to Accepted Forum

Well done for your first time, server be lucky to have you. Please wait for a GM to implemented you, maybe quick or slow. Patience.

Moved to Denied Forum

-Three of the answers from open response questions need more detail along needs more speeches and actions. Like to point out imagine if got to that situation, want to know what you would do. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

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-Sure using the right format, this is for alt accounts. Want to get on the server use the correct format. -Metagaming definition is wrong -Bio you described does not relate to our lore, few words in bio does not sort our setting -Answers for open response questions are short need more movements and speeches. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

Moved to Denied Forum

-You only been denied only by few things that should be easily done. I do not think you know what metagaming and power-emoting means, I wish for you to add examples to them to show me you understand. For bio want it to be longer, add more history to his progression to your current character ways and add some form of link to our lore like places e.g. Use wiki for help. Nearly there, just keep trying. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

Moved to Accepted Forum

Please wait for a gm to implemented you.

Moved to Denied Forum

-Your application was hard to read, there was hardly any spaces and cannot see difference between question and answers. Try to make application more better so can read it. -Bio needs some form of link to our lore like places. -Few answers in open response questions need speeches. This is all so far that you need to improve, was hard to read. Please make following changes and wait 24 hours to re-apply.

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-Need definitions for metagaming and power-emoting, do some research. No coping. -Wrong definition for OOC. -Definition for IC need more explaining, not fully explained on what it means. -Bio could be longer, go on more detail on his life on what you explained. Also recommend adding form of link to our lore mostly places would help also current information. -No link for skin -Answers for open response questions is also need of more detail add more speeches/movements. Make it look professional and good. Make this follow changes and may get in. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply, good luck.

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Have to say this application was poorly made, but you can make improvements. Here is the list of these: -Roleplaying definition is wrong, not explained much. -Metagaming definition looks like you copied it from somewhere, does not explain much of what it means. -For previously made application part, should of sounded around that you did make one, cannot remember or have no link to it. Be alot easiler. -Bio needs to be longer, more history that shaped your character and need some form of link to our lore like places. Ambitions need spelling/grammer check. For skilled talents, you said spells. Sadly cannot, have to learn these IG. -Skin link broken -Answers for open response questions need to be more longer, throw in more speeches and movements to make sense to whats going on. -Oh missed two new questions, look at the application topic to see the changes. Do not give up, please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

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Nicely done application but not give me the feel to accept you yet. Make these improvements maybe have a chance. Bet you will do it well: -Metagaming and power-emoting are short to make them longer, add examples. Make them good. -Bio could be longer, feel missing stuff. More information on his life, more detail on sections and needs some form of link to our lore like places. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply, time starts from this post.