ShadowoKing

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied -All need to do is adjust your bio abit, how he got to Asulon. Do not say was born there, not on land that long. -Still your answers for ORQ are too short and lack of detail. Add more actions for your character, add to your answers actions and movements to lead the end. Not too long but to show your roleplay. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied -Poorly presented got these: [/] everywhere on your answers -Need defintion for metagaming and power-emoting, do research and type your understanding of it. Roleplaying defintion could explain more. -Bio is too short, cannot be in Uk. This is a fantasy world with its own lore. You did not read our lore currently, read and create a character like to be. No magic. -Need image of the skin -Answers for ORQ are too short as well needs more actions and speeches from your character. Overall this application is poorly made and not look like you are serious. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied -Roleplaying definition is in-correct -Bio need some form link to our lore like places, Aegis/Asulon e.g. -Need image of the skin not the skin itself, so its easiler on us to see it. -Answers for ORQ are too short and not tell much on what your character does. Add speeches and movements on what your character does. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

Moved to Accepted Forum

Accepted Please wait for a gm to implemented you.

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied You were so close just two things to adjust and hopefully in on next application: -Definition you gave for power-emoting is more on powergaming other side. Power-emoting is not that, so find correct definition for this. -Answers for ORQ I feel need speeches to see how he speaks and give roleplay feel. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied -Application not very presentable keep seeing these: which not sorted properly and need to make it so can tell whats the question and whats a answer. -Could add example for metagaming to show more understanding. -powergaming question is now changed to power-emoting so need to change this and plus defintion was wrong. -Don't joke around with sub-race -For bio how he got to Asulon and could add information on what your character is like, can go over two paragraphs. -Need image of the skin -Answers for ORQ need more detail on what your character does maybe add speeches. Also like to point out cannot steal people's money or item without a VA (villian application). Do these and could have better luck next time, please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied -Not fully explained what roleplaying means, feel half finished. More detail on what it means. -Metagaming definition is in-correct -Power-emoting is partly right but not fully explains what it means. Get a better example for power-emoting. -For your race what are you orc or dwarf. Dwarf is not a sub-race. -Bio is too short, not explained much of his past and what he is. Not sound like orc more human or elf. -Open response answers are too short add roleplay like speeches and movements (emotes). Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

I want to be one but do not think someone would just go and become a emotion-less slave unless brainwashed or tortured to a slave.

Moved to Accepted Forum

Accepted Changed format abit, powergaming is now power-emoting, but rest is well done. Please wait for a gm to implemented you.

Moved to Accepted Forum

Accepted Please wait for a GM to implemented you

Option 2, make it small first (not too small, village size maybe) and grow when we have more numbers. Edited: If we do, middle is sacrifice area not big as temple but a stand. Sacrifice captured criminials, animals. Other race can bring sacrifice to show us more respect. Then we have stands and houses. If we do not have our own 'village' what if Kha' fed up of other races being mean and have no home. We will be on mainland and can go out adventuring. This place will be a safe place to get respect, and shelter. We might even welcome other races that respect our ways along as we trade to boost our relationships.

Moved to Accepted Forum

Accepted Show understanding about Elves and what I said from previous application. Please wait for a gm to implemented you.