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ShadowoKing

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  1. -Metagaming needs more explaining, what is metagaming expect that its cheating and ruins rp, why? What is it? -For power-emoting feels need an example to show you do understand what it means. -Bio need little more detail on your character's background and need some form of link to our lore. Places e.g. -Find your skin not so medieval and looks like a king. Try to make it suite with your bio please. -For open response questions, I feel needs some movements to your answers to see what your character does like a story but on you. Please try to do all these get better chance getting in. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply, time starts from this post.
  2. Please use the proper application format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/57513-official-server-whitelist-application/ Please wait 24 hours to re-apply, wait after this post.
  3. -Roleplaying needs more explaination on what it means. -For metagaming its not just knowing only character's information. -For bio add some form of link to our lore like places e.g. also add what is his current age? -Skin could be better, not major but recommend asking our lovely server for a nice skin. Do app first then sort this out. Does not like Dwarf-ish. Well overall its great especally the open response questions' answers, just need to sort these out and could have a bigger chance next time. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply, time starts from this post.
  4. You shown understand of the words roleplaying, metagaming and power-emoting. Bio got understanding on our lore and makes sense. Also the answers for open response questions are great and new. Well done. Please wait for a GM to implemented you.
  5. You got good understanding about roleplay and seems to roleplay well. Welcome to our server. Please wait for a GM to implemented you.
  6. -The presentation of the application is too spaced out and seems two questions were combined together, space them out. -Metagaming definition is wrong, research -Power-emoting definition wrong but on right line. -Rangers is not a sub-race. -Bio needs more detail on what is going on, current age. Need some link to our lore like places, Asulon e.g. Undead are not in Asulon if you wanted to know, learn more from wiki. -Skin link is broke -Answers for open response questions need to be clear and detailed on what your character does. Few need more stuff on whats going on. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
  7. -Roleplaying definition. You explained it from last app, why you saying you do not know? -There is a confusion on what character tring to be. markus stone which is 17 and skin match this. Bungo is his other name? Also a drunk, farmer thats good with traps, and old. Recommend making it clearer to understand what character tring to be, and by these similar things could consider being a halfling. So make character clearer and edit skin, bio to person want to play as. Well have to say this was better, please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
  8. -Theres some spelling errors -Roleplaying is not just about meeting people and quests -Metagaming definition is not clearly explained, feel half explained -Bio could be more detailed and have some form of link to our lore. -Answers for open response questions need more detail, some need speeches and moments. Also murdering agrees a VA so have to be with guards. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
  9. Just been killed by a frost witch, great roleplay :D

  10. -Metagaming definition is wrong, research some more. -Power-emoting definition is slightly wrong, on right path, missing parts. -Bio needs to be longer, needs history to make the person you are going to play. Nose off and still smell is kinda unrealistic. Need some form of link to our lore like places. -Cannot see the skin, from better source to allow us to see it. -Answers for open response questions could be longer, add movements and a way to end it. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
  11. -Power-emoting definition is wrong -Bio could be longer, add more detail on past and why does he want to follow this path. Does and some form of link to our lore like places. -Few answers for open response questions need more depth, add speeches to them and few need more stuff. Also first not feel total realistic. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply
  12. Heard now there is power armour or should I say armour enchanted that looks like spacemarines. Also grenades by goblins. WT*

    1. Kickstarted and Running

      Kickstarted and Running

      Lol. Some cities used Space Marine skins for guards, and Goblins have been used as grenades for a long time, since Aegis. They are also used as saboteurs.

  13. I'm going to accept you, miss tiny bits but shown understanding even if some are complex for my mind, hope none is copied. Please wait for a GM to implemented you.
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