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ShadowoKing

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  1. Denied -Only problem is the bio you made is short and need more details on how he got the skills e.g. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
  2. Denied -Problem that I find is your answers for open response answers are short, need some roleplay feel. Like speeches, movements, fails e.g. Also try to make application look better, add colours? Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
  3. Denied -Your bio needs some form of link to our lore, places, Aegis, Asulon e.g. -Where is the Open response Questions, copy the full application. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
  4. Denied -This is not the correct application format, please use application format from this link: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/57513-offical-server-whitelist-application/ (in the white box, highlight and copy) Please wait 24 hours to re-apply
  5. Denied -Definintions you gave for roleplaying, metagaming and power-emoiting are in-correct. You did not explain well on what they mean. -Being an assassain requires a VA to able to assassainate/bribe. So you cannot be a assassain. Also your bio seems have no background of your character, not much detail. Also when you edit your mistakes add some form of link to our lore like places. -For ORQ. Cloud temple is not a town. But the main point is that your answers lack detail and you need to add more. Add roleplay feel. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
  6. Denied This is a nice application, did what the other app member wants but I feel your ORQ answers need more detail and go one direction. Imagine it as roleplay and thats one direction this relates to your first ORQ answer. Next one I hope you get in, please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
  7. Denied -Recommend answering the questions before sumbitting a plank application. Please wait 2 hours to re-apply.
  8. Denied Please use the proper format, the applciation format is in the box white in this link: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/57513-offical-server-whitelist-application/ Please wait 2 hours to re-apply
  9. Denied -Please use the correct application format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/57513-offical-server-whitelist-application/ (application is in white box) Please wait 2 hours to re-apply.
  10. Denied -Roleplaying definition is slightly in-correct but near the right line. Add examples for metagamin/power-emoting for more understanding. -For bio, need to know where about he lived. Asulon, Aegis e.g. Use information from lore and/or wiki for places. -Answers for ORQ, you explained what he might do but can you action these. Add movements and speeches for your character doing what you tolded me. Please wait 25 hours to re-apply.
  11. Denied The application is not filled, please answer the questions. Re-apply when you can.
  12. Denied -Roleplaying, metagaming and powergaming defintions you gave are in-correct. -Advise to put bio into the application not on a text file, be alot easiler. -For bio, cannot have magic and how did he get to Asulon? -The answers you gave for ORQ need to be longer add more movements and speeches. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply
  13. Denied -For metagaming and power-emoting would advise adding more information or add a example for better understanding. And this is in-correct. -Character name is not sound Elvish, sound like a Dwarf. -For bio how did he got to Asulon? -Skin link is broken -The answers for ORQ need more detail to what your character does, add speeches and other things. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.
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