Gwonam_Blaze

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Your application has been denied for the following reasons: - You have no provided any answers to the definitions. You 'must' give an answer to all of these questions. Please provide the correct definition and perhaps an example for each of them. I'd recommend using this page to research your definitions (remember not to directly copy, and use your own words!): http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying - Your biography is much too short (must be at least a couple of paragraphs long). Please provide an interesting, yet, somewhat brief story of your character's life, starting from their birth and childhood up to where they are today. The events should be interesting but not ridiculous or cliche. I'd recommend checking out this guide if you need help making a bio: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/106864-the-dos-and-do-nots-of-application-biographies/ - Your biography contains no server lore, which is very important. Please include at least 2 locations from Anthos and mention of at least one of the other races not related to your character. If you need help finding server lore, check out our official wiki here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ - You need to expand on your personality to tell us more about your character and how they act in society. - Your ambitions don't make any sense; Why does your character have these goals? What did the Orcs/Goblins ever do to your character to make him hate them so much? - Your strengths don't make any sense or have any depth behind them. How is your character 'skilled' at healing? How did your character acquire their skills in swordsmanship? What is this 'Orcrist' sword that you mentioned? - Your character 'must' have at least one weakness. A weakness needs to be a trait that's relatively unique and could put them at a disadvantage in certain situations (weaknesses don't all have to be combat related). - You need to give a brief description of your character's appearance. You also need to provide a 3D screenshot of your character's skin where requested. Use this guide if you need help getting one: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/51343-how-to-obtain-your-skin-screenshot/ Your application needs a lot of work. Spend plenty of time making sure you've answered ALL the questions accurately and that your biography is interesting, makes sense and has plenty of lore. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Your application has been accepted! Congratulations! A GM should implement you soon. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Your application has been denied as you haven't made the following changes in the 24 pending hours: - Your biography's not bad, but doesn't make sense in some parts. What is this 'Underworld'? How old was he when he started mugging people and robbing houses? Who offered him this 'job' to kill someone, and why? Please expand on your bio and include more detail on major events such as these. - Your biography doesn't contain enough server lore. Please mention at least 2 locations in Anthos (preferably one being your character's birthplace). If you need help finding server lore, check out our official wiki here: wiki.lordofthecraft.net - Your personality contradicts itself; He's 'evil', yet, he cares for others who suffer worse than him? These two traits completely conflict one another. - While not necessary, I would recommend changing your character's eye color as red definitely does not suit Humans (even with Dark Elf heritage) and can lead to ridicule. Your application's a good start so far, but it does need work. Please spend a fair amount of time ensuring all of the points I've made above are corrected. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

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Your application has been accepted! Congratulations! Nice work! A GM should implement you soon. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

This pictures speaks a thousand words, but none of them are 'Bliss'...

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Your application has been accepted! Congratulations! An amazing first application! There's very little I can say that could've been improved! Your definitions were all spot on and your biography was very interesting while remaining casual. A GM should implement you soon. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Your application has been denied because you did not make the following changes in the 24 pending hours provided: - Your biography is a nice start, but could use a bit more detail in certain places, such as your characters parents getting lost at sea (wondering why he wasn't with them) and the encounter with the bandits (how did he escape, and what happened in between?). Just add some detail to some of the events to make your biography more interesting. - Your biography doesn't quite contain enough server lore. Please add mention of at least 1 more location from Anthos and at least 1 of the other races. If you need help finding server lore, check out our official wiki here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ - Expand on your weaknesses a little and explain how they could put your character at a possible disadvantage. Your application is very good, just needs a bit of tweaking. It's also worth mentioning that red eyes don't really suit Humans and might lead to you being ridiculed, so I'd recommend changing them (though, not entirely necessary). You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

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Your application has been accepted! Congratulations! A very good first application. Your definitions were all spot on and your biography was pretty good, however, the constant switching between 1st and 3rd person was a bit bothersome. However, the rest of your application was excellent! A GM should implement you soon. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

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Your application has been denied for the following reasons: - You confirmed that you have roleplayed before, yet, failed to tell us how. Please explain what roleplaying experience you've had. - 'OOC' is not a 'rule'. Please give us an actual full rule from our rules page here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/page/info/rules - All of your definitions are incorrect. Please research their correct meanings any way you choose and give us their true definitions, however, remember not to plagiarise. I'd recommend using this page to research the definitions: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying - Your biography doesn't make any sense and progresses far too quickly without giving much detail. How did things get so bad for your characters family that they all died except for him? Who exactly is 'Zing' and how long has your character known him for? Why did they 'have' to depart the village? How did Zing finally die? Please give plenty of details on all of the events in your character's life from their childhood up to where they are today. - Your biography doesn't contain much server lore. Please add at least 1 more location from Anthos and mention of at least 1 of the other races. If you need help finding server lore, check out our official wiki here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ - Please expand on your character's personality; 3 words doesn't really tell us much. Give more details on how your character acts in society. - Your skills and weaknesses need more detail. How exactly is he good at sneaking? Why is he 'weak' to close combat? - You need to include a 3D screenshot of your character's skin at the end. If you need help getting one, check out this guide: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/51343-how-to-obtain-your-skin-screenshot/ - Your entire application is full of spelling and other grammar errors; far too many to be considered 'acceptable'. Please check through your application several times before posting and use some sort of spell-checker to ensure you've made as few mistakes as possible. You have quite a lot of work to do, but I'm sure that if you try hard enough you'll make a brilliant application! You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

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Your application has been accepted! Congratulations! A GM should implement you soon. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

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Your application has been denied for the following reasons: - Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect. Please research their correct meanings and give us an appropriate answer. I'd recommend using this page to research: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying - Your biography is very short, doesn't have much depth and is very cliche. Your parents being killed by bandits then seeking out revenge is one of the most cliche biography stories we ever see; I'd highly recommend changing it to be more original and interesting. Please add a lot more events that have affected your character, going through their childhood, early life and where they are today. Also add more detail to the events already included; Your parents dying doesn't have much impact when we hardly even know the character. Especially add more details to things such as learning skills; 1-liners are not acceptable for skills. - Your biography contains no server lore. Please include mention of at least 2 cities from Anthos, especially your birthplace, and mention of at least one of the other races. If you need help finding server lore, check out our official wiki: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ - You must include a 3D screenshot of your character's skin. If you need help getting a screenshot of your skin, check out this guide: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/51343-how-to-obtain-your-skin-screenshot/ Not a bad first attempt. You have a bit of work to do, especially on the bio, so make sure you spend plenty of time perfecting your application. Don't forget to check out the 'Application Guides' in the 'Tutorials and Guides' section of the forums if you need help. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

I would buy this.

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Your application has been accepted! Congratulations! (Check notes) The majority of your changes were good, but the fact that you didn't even change your answer to powergaming, rather, added on to it while it was wrong bothered me. However, I feel you are worth accepting so long as you read my explanation of it here: - Powergaming (or 'Power-emoting') is forcing your actions on to another player without giving them a chance to respond or considering their own reaction. Example: *Example Assailant swings his blade toward Vithquar's head in an attempt to kill her.* *Vithquar avoids the attack and thrusts her blade in to the Assailant's eye, killing him instantly.* Notice here how the 'Example Assailaint' attempted to attack my character rather than assuming or insisting he succeeded? This is the correct way to roleplay. Vithquar (my character) on the other hand, forced her action without considering her opponent might avoid her attack or respond in some other way. In this instance, Vithquar was powergaming. If you have any further questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!