Gwonam_Blaze

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Your application has been accepted! Congratulations! Impeccable work! A GM should implement you soon. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

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Your application has been accepted! Congratulations! Good work! A GM should implement you soon. If you have any further questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Your application has been denied because you didn't make the following changes in the 24 hour period: - Your definitions aren't wrong, but your metagaming definition needs a bit more detail or possibly an example. - Your biography is quite nice, but doesn't really contain any server lore. Please include plenty, including at least a couple of cities and mention of a few of the other races. If you need help finding server lore, use our official wiki here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ . Also, add some more events that have had an impact on your character and made them in to who they are today; Create a really interesting story for them! - You really need to get a screenshot of your skin! You can do it by any means necessary, it doesn't matter; just so long as we can clearly see your skin is appropriate. If you need help getting a screenshot, check out this guide: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/51343-how-to-obtain-your-skin-screenshot/ Please make sure you've fixed these points before posting again. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any further questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

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Your application has been accepted! Congratulations! A GM should implement you soon. If you have any further questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Your application has been accepted! Congratulations! Lovely! Your application is much better without the unfitting and nonsensical lore in bio. A GM should implement you soon. If you have any further questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Orrrr, it's more or less just a bit of fun... I'm sure you've heard of the word at least once.

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Your application has been denied and requires the following changes: - As the previous AT claimed, a few events in your biography don't make much sense. In the first sentence, your character's mother just 'abandons' him on someone else's doorstep and we are given no more information. Try to give the events in your biography more depth and explanation. Also, your biography is a little bit bland. There aren't really any 'interesting' events that happened to your character, besides being abandoned at birth. Try to make his story more interesting and appealing so that we'll want to read on. A good example is about how your character's father trains him. Just saying "His father trained him" is very boring and feels lazy; Turn his training in to an interesting story that really has an impact on him. - Again, your biography did not contain anywhere near enough lore. You only mentioned one city, which is far too insufficient; Please add a decent amount more lore so we can be sure you've read up on it a lot. If you need help finding any, use our official wiki here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ - Your weaknesses need improvement. Lacking skill with a weapon isn't really a weakness since nobody is skilled with weapons without training. A weakness has to be a flaw your character has that could put them at a disadvantage (doesn't necessarily have to be combat related). Your application is a lot better, but still needs work. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

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Your application has been denied for the following reasons: - Your bio (which, can I say, has an amazingly good feeling of suspense and dread behind it; I can tell you'd make a great horror novelist!) really doesn't fit in with our lore. The only difference it seems to have from your last attempt is that instead of being a Werewolf, he's now more-or-less a 'Were-Kharajyr'. I'm afraid you simply cannot be a Werewolf character; They've never been acceptable in our lore. Kharajyr are a race of 'Cat-People' and are not the result of some kind of curse. If you wish to play on Lord of the Craft, I'm afraid you're going to have to try and drop the whole Werewolf themed character entirely because it will never be accepted. Your application as a whole was very nice, but the sad truth is: You'll never be accepted if you try to apply as a 'Werewolf' of any sort. Please apply as a lore appropriate character in future. Again though, I actually kept reading through your bio because it was so immersive and exciting! If you could use that talent you have for writing a lore-appropriate biography then I can guarantee you'd have a much easier time being accepted! You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Your application has been accepted! Congratulations! Much better! The amount of lore you've included is just about acceptable, but Hanseti was a city in Asulon. However, I'm willing to overlook this flaw as it shouldn't have much impact on your character and can easily be fixed. A GM should implement you soon. If you have any further questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Your application has been denied for the following reasons: - Your biography is a lot better, but still doesn't contain enough server lore. The only addition you seemed to make was the mention of the Undead, who have not appeared in Lord of the Craft since Aegis (which was well over 100 in-game years ago), making it completely irrelevent. Next time, add server lore applicable to Anthos, the realm we currently live in. Your application is much better, but unfortunately, not applicable for acceptance due to the lack of lore. Just spend a while fixing the issue I've shared above and you'll do fine. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any further questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

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Your application has been accepted! Congratulations! Much better than your first application! A GM should implement you soon. If you have any questions or concerns feel free to message/PM me!

Moved to Accepted Forum

Your application has been accepted! Congratulations! A GM should implement you soon. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Even though I more or less play one (I won't deny it, go ahead and scold me for it), lesbians of any sort. The server isn't as rampant with them as it used to be (To all you young-in's, in mid-Asulon the ratio of straight females to lesbians was about 1:3, not even kidding), but they're still a little bothersome to see sometimes. I won't try and justify Vithy too much, but at least she 'sort of' has a reason; She suffers from a god-complex disorder and narcissism, meaning she's attracted to herself to an extent where she more or less lacks a sexuality. Because of this, neither gender, yet at the same time, both genders fit her sexuality criteria, however, women represent herself much closer than men do and because she quite simply likes sex, she finds them more attractive (however, she has been known to sleep with men on several occasions :P). However, what bothers me more (although I'll admit, aren't so overplayed these days. Thanks community!) are 'bisexual' characters that never interact with males. I noticed this a lot during the mid-Asulon les-plosion; There was a lot of characters whose players would claim were 'bisexual' but would only ever hit on females (Yes, Vith 'prefers' females, but she is still somewhat attracted to men). That bothered me more than anything, but thankfully, it stopped recently.

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