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LordCommander

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  1. Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.
  2. Congratulations my friend! your application has been deemed acceptable by the standards of Lord of the Craft. I hope you enjoy your travels through the world of Axios, and if you need any help, come join the New Player Discord! https://discord.gg/C2ETUy9
  3. Well, my friend, your application has not been deemed acceptable by the standards of Lord of the Craft. There a few things you need to fix in order to get your application accepted. Once you have done them, send me a private msg and I shall review it again. 1) Definitions: Your definition of metagaming is incorrect, I recommend looking on the LoTC Wiki for their definition. After reading it, word it in your own way to avoid plagiarism. 2) Backstory: According to your race, you are a human, however, it says that you are related to a Dwarven King? how does that work? it seems rather strange in my opinion even if you are distant relatives. 3) Ambitions: This is a rather small nick-pick, however, your ambitions are to be a lawless man? that really isn't a goal. I recommend thinking of something more ambitious such as the leader of a bandit gang or master outlaw. You have 24 Hours to edit your application.
  4. I have always wanted a human culture like this, really glad someone actually beat me to it. Haven't read it all, but so far it looks really cool! I'd love to see this culture become a bigger thing. Would totally play a character from this culture.
  5. Well my friend, I have some bad news to tell you. Your application has a few big mistakes that need to be fixed in order to be accepted. Once you have made your edits, send me a private msg on the forums to notify me that you are ready for another review. 1) Definitions: Your definition of powergaming is incorrect, I recommend reading the LoTC Wiki's definition of powergaming then wording it in your own words. 2)Backstory: You are missing 1 reference to the lore, and honestly your backstory is rather lacking, maybe go into detail on HOW they lost their memory or why are they blind? 3)Skin: Well, we kinda need a skin in order to accept/deny you. However, if you REALLY need a skin, I can possibly make you a skin to use. You have 24 hours to fix your application.
  6. Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.
  7. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.
  8. Congratulations my friend! I am eager to tell you that your application has been deemed acceptable by the standards of Lord of the Craft. I hope your travels through the world of Axios go well and are full of adventure! should you need any help, don't be afraid to msg me on the server, or join the New Player Discord! https://discord.gg/C2ETUy9
  9. High Warpriest Cathal, during one of the few breaks he allows himself between the construction of his War Temple, is alerted of the announcement. While eating a hearty meal of Sausage, Bacon, and Bread. He stares at his message with confusion before saying "Huh...that was quick." Would quickly return to his meal, hoping that this Pontiff will be a rather respectable rival and that they do not die of such a pathetic matter like the previous Pontiff.
  10. High Warpriest Cathal is overseeing construction of his War Temple, leading the Daelish in the construction of such a mighty temple. However one of his newer converts runs towards him with news of the event. Cathal casually blinks "Well....****." There is a pause as he takes it in "How did he died?" after being told, he would speak again "That is a failure's death, let us hope the next Pontiff is made of stronger stuff, else the church will fall beneath its bloated weight." before returning quickly to construction.
  11. Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.
  12. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.
  13. Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.
  14. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.
  15. Congratulations my friend! Your application is acceptable by the standards of Lord of the Craft. I hope you enjoy your time and travels through the lands of Axios, should you need any help, don't be afraid to msg me on the forums or in game, you can also join the New Player Discord! https://discord.gg/C2ETUy9
  16. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.
  17. Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.
  18. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.
  19. Well, my friend, you did the format incorrectly. However I'm not going to deny or put you pending for that, your application was pretty good quality, I admire the simplicity yet ambitious goal you have, and really hope you one day achieve it. Your application has been deemed acceptable son of Urguan, welcome to the land of Axios. I wish you the best of luck and should you need any help, don't be afraid to msg me on the server/forums or join the New Player Discord. https://discord.gg/C2ETUy9
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