Your application has been...
Hello! After reading through your application, I've decided to deny it for the reasons listed below. Don't be discouraged, however, as I'm sure you will be able to fix it!
First off, your biography was good, but I would really like it if you expand a bit on it, especially the first paragraph, it's rather bland!
Secondly, and this may sound stupid, but I need Jtheo's confirmation that he has allowed you to play his brother! So, please, let him send me a PM and all will be fine. But don't let him eat me, again! :(
Finally, your Open Response Questions, actually only the first and second one, need to have dialogue. I want to see your full roleplaying capabilities. Also, I'd much rather have you write them in third person, as that is how we roleplay on the server!
As I said, an amazing application, I was sad when I had to deny it.
Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!