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  1. Your application has been... Hello! After reading through your application, I've decided to deny it for the reasons listed below. Don't be discouraged however, as I'm sure that you will be able to fix the issues! First off, you have not posted on the Minecraft Forums. What you have to do, is go to this topic and post your whole application as a post on that topic. Secondly, I found your biography to be rather short. It did include lore, yes, but it was far too short. So, expand on it by adding, for example, more parts of your childhood! All of your Open Response Questions need to be vastly expanded upon. They're rather short. Also add some dialogue to them! As I said, don't be discouraged. I'm sure you will be able to fix this! Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any more questions, feel free to pop me a PM!
  2. Your application has been... Good job. I had a good read whilst reading this application! Please wait patiently for a GM to implement you. Happy roleplaying on your new account!
  3. Your application has been... Hello! After reading through your application, I've decided to deny it for the reasons listed below. Don't be discouraged, however, as I'm sure you will be able to fix it! First off, your biography was good, but I would really like it if you expand a bit on it, especially the first paragraph, it's rather bland! Secondly, and this may sound stupid, but I need Jtheo's confirmation that he has allowed you to play his brother! So, please, let him send me a PM and all will be fine. But don't let him eat me, again! :( Finally, your Open Response Questions, actually only the first and second one, need to have dialogue. I want to see your full roleplaying capabilities. Also, I'd much rather have you write them in third person, as that is how we roleplay on the server! As I said, an amazing application, I was sad when I had to deny it. Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!
  4. Your application has been... I have literally no reason to deny this. Welcome to Anthos! Please wait patiently for a GM to implement you, happy roleplaying. Oh, and if you have any questions when you're in game, type /mentor, it'll help you a lot!
  5. Your application has been... Put on Pending. Don't worry, this isn't denied, I just need you to fix a few minor issues. After you've done so, PM me and I'll change the verdict. However, if you don't do so within 24 hours, I have to deny your application! Which I really don't want to, since it's amazing. The issue here is that I don't see dialogue in your Open Response Questions. I really want to see this, because I believe that you're an amazing roleplayer. So please, fix this so I can see your full roleplaying capabilities! Good job. You fixed the issues within the application! Now, please wait patiently for a GM to implement you. If you have any questions when you're in game, type /mentor. I think that command would help you a lot if you do!
  6. Your application has been... Sorry for the long wait. The application was amazing, but I had to check up on some things. Happy roleplaying on your new account ^-^. P.S. Happy late birthday! Please wait patiently for a GM to implement you.
  7. Your application has been... I'm sorry to deny this, but you have not waited twenty-four (24) hours from your previous application's verdict. The verdict, at least for me, was around 3:34 PM today, and you posted your application on 8:32 PM today. Now, I know that it could possibly be different times for you, but that doesn't change that it you have to wait 24 hours. Sorry! Please wait 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!
  8. Your application has been... Hello! After reading through your application I've decided to deny it. The reasons will be listed below. However, don't be discouraged, as I'm sure you will be able to fix the issues! First off, you have not posted on the Minecraft Forums. What you have to do, is go to this topic and paste your whole application as a post on that topic. Secondly, all of your Open Response Questions need to be expanded. They're rather short right now, we want to see your full roleplaying potential! I quite enjoyed reading through your biography, it was one of the better ones, which made me sad to deny it. As said before, I'm sure you can fix it! Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any more questions, feel free to pop me a PM!
  9. Your application has been... Put on Pending. Don't worry. This isn't denied, I just want you to fix one small issue that I have found in the application. The issue is that you haven't posted on the Minecraft Forums. What you have to do, is go here and post your entire application as a post on that topic. After you've done so, PM me and I'll change your application to accepted! However, if you do not do this within 24 hours, I have to sadly deny this, even though it is a very good application. Good! You posted on the forums, which means that I will accept you! Welcome to Lord of the Craft! Please wait patiently for a GM to implement you. If you have any questions when you're in game, type /mentor. I'm sure it'll come in as useful!
  10. Your application has been... Excellent! You fixed all the errors in your last application! Please wait patiently for a GM to implement you, happy roleplaying!
  11. Your application has been... I don't want to come over as angry, blunt or annoying to you, but I could barely read your application. It has a lot of grammatical errors in it and the English isn't really all that good. I'm sorry to say this. However, you could try and put your application through, for example, Microsoft Words and use its spelling checker! That could possibly work. Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any more questions, feel free to pop me a PM!
  12. PIKA PI

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    2. gingernut97

      gingernut97

      I choose you, Onix! Go!

    3. big narstie

      big narstie

      Cool, awesome and wicked all at once! Yea! SO UGUU! ;3

    4. lev

      lev

      ^ so gay

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