MonkeyCoffee

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Your application has been... Hello! After reading through your application, I've decided to deny it for the following reasons: First of all, your meta-gaming and power-emoting definitons are incorrect. I suggest searching the definitions on the internet. But remember, don't plagiarise, write it in your own words. Secondly, I found your biography to be very cliché. Parents being killed by bandits, that has been used many, many times before. I'm sure you can think of something creative that hasn't been used before! Then, I found no lore in your biography. Here is a link to the wiki to help you! http://www.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?/external/wiki Some more stuff with your biography. "He didn't know to hide, run, climb a tree or fight. So he tried to reason with them.And as you may guess,That didn't work.So he ran" Apparently, your character didn't know how to run, but ran away. Why didn't he do that in the first place? In the question where you describe your skills, your character seems to be good at some things, but you didn't explain that in your biography. I think that, by explaining how and when he learned those things, you could make your biography longer and more detailed. Also, add some weaknesses, your character seems like someone very over-powered. All of your Open Response Questions need to be expanded greatly. Your first two Open Response Questions need dialogue and more actions, whilst you third one needs more actions. For your first two Open Response Questions, you describe that you kill someone. You need a Villain Application for this, which you can make after you have been accepted to the server for more than a week. Also, you say "kill him" and "kill them". That is very heavy powergaming, as you give no chance for the other person to respond. Describe how your character attacks, but of course, this isn't allowed, unless they provoke you. I know that this may sound like a lot, but I'm sure you can do this! Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post's edit (seen below) or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

MY RAAAI

Character Name Nicknames: Makapakka, Makaykay. Age: 321 Gender: Female Race: Dark Elf Status: Alive and active. Description Height: 6’5. Weight: ~Eighty Five pounds. Body Type: Somewhat below average. Eyes: Red Hair: Grey with a rose on the right front side. Skin: Darker Grey/Light Black. Markings/Tattoos: The only real noticable marking is that her left ear got cut off. Health: Might fine. Personality: A nice girl that you’d probaply love to be friends with. She’s usually not shy, but is a coward and would rather not fight anyone. Inventory: A self crafted wooden staff, some melon slices and a pouch around her waist. Further Details: N/A. Life Style Alignment*: Lawful Good Deity*: The Aspects; Cernunnos and Cerridwen. Religion: Druidism. Alliance/Nation/Home: Malinor | The Druidic Order | The Druid’s Grove. Job/Class: Dedicant, slowly working her way up to a Druid. Title(s): Dedicant, previously Monk. Profession(s): Medic(?), cook. Special Skill(s): First aid, singing, cooking. Flaw(s): Weak, smaller than most Elves. Magic* Current Status: Arch-type: Sub-Type: Rank: Weakness(es): Strength(s): Current Spell(s): Weaponry Fighting Style: Not getting into fights. Trained Weapon: Loooooove~ Favored Weapon: Running away from fights. Archery: N/A. Biography Parents: Iluin and Manalica. Makayla thinks that both of them are dead. I might be searching for someone to play them in the future. MIGHT. Siblings: Kayla. Children: N/A Extended Family: Rai, Sapphire, Sen. Pet(s): Nibby. History Might write her biography in the future, right now, I’m far too lazy to do that. Artwork

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Your application has been... Hello! After reading through your application, I've decided to deny it for the following reasons: First off, I want you to expand on your meta-gaming and roleplaying definitions. Make them longer, and also add an example to both. Secondly, gold is not the official currency. The official currency is called Minas. It is minor, but it's just something good to know. Then, another things, PVP is not something that people say in roleplay. Yes, people do it sometimes, but it's not a term that people actually say when roleplaying. In the question where you describe your skills, you mention that you're good with swords, bows, hunting, farming and survival. I can understand that your character knows how to survive, but where did she learn how to fight with a sword or bow? Where did she learn how to hunt and farm? You could add this to your biography to make it longer! Your skin, whilst good, has one major problem with it. High Elves have pale skin, the skin that you currently have looks more like a Wood Elf. Please add some dialogue to your first and second Open Response Questions, we want to see your best roleplaying capabilities. In your last Open Response Question, you describe that the Dwarf wants you to bury some crack. Crack is not a drug that exists in LoTC as far as I know, however, you could change it to Cactus Green, as that is the most common drug that exists in the world of Anthos. Another thing with your last Open Response Question. You give the Dwarf an enchanted flower. How, exactly, did your character get one? Someone cannot simply get an enchanted flower, plus, I don't see the use of that anyway. I know that this may sound like a lot, but I know that you can fix this! Also, if I come over as mean to you, then I'm sorry, that is not my purpose, I am only trying to help you. Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post's edit (seen below) or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

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Your application has been... I'm sorry, but I cannot read this. Please do not change the color to black, it blends in with the background and makes it un-readable. Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

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Your application has been... You have not waited 24 hours after your previous denial. Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post's edit or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

PREACH IT, BROEDER.

That's really easy. You know how to put pictures in, right? You do it in exactly the same way!

Do you mean gifs, as in, moving pictures, or actual videos that have sound?