MonkeyCoffee

Makayla was taking a walk through the Dwarven Kingdom, cladded in thick clothing due to the cold. A shiver runs up her spine Brr... She mumbles "Damn this cold...I don't even know why I went here.." She rolls her eyes shortly after saying that and turns around, quickly noticing the notice board with the poster on it. She walks towards it, her eyes fixating on the contents of the poster. "...Sappy? ...Why does she always get in trouble...?" she mumbles once again before ripping down the poster and putting it in her bag. Brr... "I should head back...why is this damn place so cold...?" she says, continueing on her way back.

To add onto what Cmack said, in Sethbling's most recent map, Ghost Squadron, he somehow made the people in your team transparent. It looks really awesome, and maybe somehow it is also able to be implemented in here, but only for the ghosts of course.

If you're gonna add it, maybe they would only be only be able to do it at night and/or only would be able to do it with people who have a weak mental mind/low willpower, kinda like with Frost Witches.

I very much like this! It would be so cool to RP with one, or even better, RP one of them. Another idea: what if there would be some kind of event that forced all ghosts towards one place for a few days? Like a real haunted house with lots of ghosts.

6/10. I see you around quite more often lately.

( KEEP IT SECRET, KEEP IT SAFE)

Moved to Denied Forum

8/10 Nice and simple, gets the job done :')

Your application has been... Hello. After reading through your application, I've decided to deny it for the following reasons: First off, I'd like you to expand on your roleplaying definition. Your meta-gaming definition is also slightly incorrect, add an example to this one too, like with your power-emoting definition. Secondly, your sub-race is set as Dark Elf, however, you describe your character in your biography more as a High Elf. I presume that this is just a typo, but it's just something small to fix. Your skin, however, resembles a Wood Elf. Wood Elves have a cinnamon-ish colored skin, whilst High Elves have a pale skin. I want you to expand on your first and second Open Response Questions. Add dialogue to both and add some more actions to them! Finally, I just want to say that I'm sorry for not reviewing this when I actually said that I would. I completely forgot about that. As an apology, I'm allowing you to post again in 12 hours, and not 24. Please make sure to include that in your new application so it doesn't get denied instantly. I hope you can forgive me. Please re-apply in 12 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a pm!

Eh...I was trying to make a wooden sickle...but it apparently doesn't work.