Evonpire

Name: Kybal'Akaal
Race: Uruk
Type(s) of Shaman: Lutamancer, Animist, Farseer
Teacher(s): Minezelf, agh Draaghluk

[!] The waves of Balian ebbed-and-flowed as Augustina passed, no sign of John Lothar nor his foolish crew who had sailed with him had appeared on the beaches. But, while she had lost so much in life, soon enough still she be reunited with her son in death soon, as a burgundy-haired man stood, waiting in the Seven Skies for his Matera.

MC Name:

         Angron_

Character's Name:

         Lodun

Character's Age:

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

         N/A

Transformed form:

         Golem [Brutus Core]

Creator's MC Name:

         XxEnderking

Creator's RP Name:

         Ulfar Starbreaker

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

A Golem is stone made animate and brought to life via the Art of Golemancy, and its various sigils, and its core. A Golem's core serves as its "heart", along with the functions of other organs as well. The Core is made of different material based on the Golem in question, and can the sigils to give it senses and such. There are various types of Golems which the Golemancer can make. Mundus, your stereotypical Golem which can range from 5ft-8ft, with strength matching their size, its core being quartz. Servus, a diminutive Golem made primarily for service with a core of Pyrite, these are not a CA creature. Brutus, the Golem which Lodun is, are 8ft-12ft tall, with a core of solid diamond, these things are rather limited in their dexterity and mainly serve as living siege engines with their strength and such. Titanicus, another non-playable Golem, are very large Golems made with a Thanhium core, and are limited to ET-use. Antecessor Core golems are akin "living" libraries with cores of sapphire, a near-death Golemancer may bind their soul to a Antecessor core via a sigil made of their blood and may be use for communication with them. Lastly, Soulbound golems are a wicked punishment, as it is a mortal soul sealed within a golem core, they may be a brutus or mundus core. Golems benefit from the durability that comes from being made of stone, though, are still susceptible to blunt weaponry or explosions. Their durability varies on the core type. Another trait of Golems is that they are generally have a very alien/muted perspective, lacking conventional emotions. Likewise, they will some connection to their Impera, though are not bound to their will. Golems also possess two states "Blue" and "Red", a Blue Golem is when a Golem is in control of their emotional conduct, while a Red Golem is when the Golem has lost control due to Core damage or a traumatic event. In the case Core destruction, memories, experiences, and such will be lost and must be remade by a Golemancer.

If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

Lodun is a 12ft piece of stone, forged into a warrior-esque figure, possessing some glowing details reflecting the magical nature of the thing. This is largely consistent for most golems, though some may possess different colours if they were carved from a certain type of stone, and some may also possess gemstones embed into them, the appearance has no effect on durability.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         No

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         Yes

Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

         Yes

Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

         Yes

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         No.

MC Name:

         Angron_

Character's Name:

         Aleksandr Renault II

Character's Age:

         Dead

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

         Heartlander

Transformed form:

         Eidola

Creator's MC Name:

         Malkaathe, Sevnen

Creator's RP Name:

         Talar'Shan, Anonymous

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

A Pale-Knight is a soul bound to a Menhir Rock via ritual preformed by Mystics. The Soul is sealed into the Menhir Permanently and is given new "life" as a Pale-Knight, often serving as a Soldier often for a Synod of Mystics. This is a tortured life for the Soul, their former personality is warped, tortured, and twisted. Their Physical Form is similarly hard, demented stone warped into descendant-like form. An Eidola do not possess vital organs akin to a fleshy being, insight the Menhir is water and a core in their torso. The Water is vital for the continued exist of the Paleknight form, and movement. Losing sufficient water will result in the Eidola passing, or being severely crippled, however, this is the only way for it to perish. For example, a Paleknight losing their head is not especially crippling as a leg or torso wound, but will still rob them of their sight. With their leg being fractured would likely result in the Eidola's passing in about 3-4 Emotes. Though, a benefit of the Earthen Nature of a Paleknight is that, slashes or weaker thursts are rather useless. Though they're weak to blunt trauma. Eidola's strength is roughly equal to the size of the descendant they're shaped to. Though, they're not especially quick, given that they're made of stone. An Eidola may shift their appearance at their Menthir, being able to be between the heights of 4ft to 9ft. Capping at Orc Strength however.

An Eidola is granted some abilities due to their nature. Firstly, is True Sight, and being able to touch incorporeal phantoms. An Eidola may make a weapon at their Menhir, forged from their, along with other crafts. An Eidola may contain 2 soul fragments in themselves, which can be got from a kill with their weapon, from a mystic, or other means. They have access to Expel Ectoplasm which allows them to warp an area with their waters with a Soul Fragment, allow them to grow it with another Fragment. This can be built on further via Eidola's keeps, which involves the sacrifice of two further soul fragments to a Menhir Craft. The Center Piece of the Keep is this craft, typically a throne or statue. The Eidola may receive further augmentation from Mystics and such, along with further development into a Pale Lord.

Death for an Eidola will result in them reforming/respawning at their Menthir over [1] OOC day. Damage sustained if they live will heal over [1] OOC day. Should an Eidola die while their Menhir is destroyed, they will be forced to PK.

If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

It is a stone-formed knight, formed from the Menhir stone. Though, the shape and appearance will change overtime within CA guidelines, as the character progresses.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         No

Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Ye

Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

         Ye

Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

         Ye

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         No

From a distance, Kybal of Clan Akaal, the once Rex merely observed the goings of his former realm atop the cliffs of the Dorazu'Kûkranks of Ilzdalgumu, wrapping up an ashen hammer, a familiar object to some, in cloth- Before setting off to write a letter to this new Rex.

E X O D U S 

Spoken, on the 7th, of The First Seed, Year 153, of the Second Age, marked by the slaying of Gazardiel by Drekur’Ungri, and Murdok’Lak.

Sha-mog-ob Krug, Pukhl-Izg, Sha-gûkr-naakh-ob Krug, Izg-diisum, Sha-grizh-ob Krug, slai-izishu, khlaar-izish rad.

To  My Horde, I address this;

My Silence on this treachery is broken; the Rebels have brought Zhara forces onto the sands of the Ilzdalgumu to unseat me. Let there be no lie spoken, the forces that come for my seat as not of Uruk origin, there is no face save the Bullgoth and Swampgoth whom I recognize as my people. Those who follow Grubnakh betray Krug for a Rex brought to power by Zhara hands. I did not deny them their “Klomp”, as has been painted, the Wargoths voted against them in our Klamor. As has been our way since my Predecessor, and is the process I abided by, under Ar-Borok’Akaal. If they had gained the Clans’ blessings I would have fought them with glee. However, I do not believe that would have changed the outcome, given that Mercenaries and rogue Urukhim stand on my Gate, and have been since the Klamor when my life was threatened.

The accusations of my Clan’s Buurzdom do not fall on deaf ears either. While, most false, or manipulated understanding or poor understanding of the Akaal ideology. These have served only to fuel the conflict against my seat further. Ignored, is that I am implicated in none of these lies made by any. The Death of Ar-Borok’Akaal was a heroic sacrifice to allow us to burn San’Valka, and the Mori’Quessir invaders within. To imply anything but such is to bring great dishonour to The Blood Rex’s name.

I have decided to bring upon myself a state of Exodus from the Horde. I call for the Clan Akaal and any loyal to me to follow suit with me in this Self-Exile. I do not judge my Kin who stay in San’Brîu, under the watchful eyes of the Ilzdalgumu ilz. As, if I was in such a possess to be able to maintain the Status Quo, I would. But, there is a Buurzdom beyond salvation inside the Horde, we see Uruks now driven by these delusions, who’d rather an Inferi touched by the Betrayer Spirit be a Rex or an Olog, chalked full of delusions, be their Leader. They may fight their battle without me. I make this choice, as I’d rather see my Clan live, and my Kinsmen thrive to fight the coming Buurz.

To  Allies, I address this;

Do you want your wish with this “New Horde”. Remember well, to watch for the Serpents in the Sand and do not forget the Infernic Ally of Grubnakh. I leave the Rexdom and what is left to Grubnakh’Lak.

Uruk ir-taar

Kybal’Akaal, “The Ram”, Azh-ob Zgur’thruk-al, Piz-ob Leyd, Groth-Uruk, zaabr-ob karn rar-ob Urin, A-Horde.

"A zhame dat nub azh elze will peep et az lat doez, Bruddah" The Rex comments. 

"An outcry-ob liez made by foolizh youth, et zeemz." The Rex merely  comments  on the matter. "Diz diztruction-ob zhrinez ahm a kommon mattur by dhoze whu dizlike kertain zpiritz." - "Likewize, Ar-Borok fell en battul wit' nub chance for assasinatiun. He khooze tu walk entu diz battle tu zave uz at di fall-ob Zan'Valka. Latz blah-ob eventz latz wuzn't even prezent tu peep."

Change from:

Redlines:
Pact roleplay, Spirit champions, and Tier progression must be posted on the forums to document progress.

Each Spirit Pact will cost 1 Spell Slot.

Change to:

Redlines:
Pact roleplay, Spirit champions, and Tier progression must be posted on the forums to document progress.

A Shaman may have two Spirit pacts per slot, with the exception of Kor's lessers, a pact with Kor grants Lutaumancy and consumes a whole slot.

Rationale

Firstly, this is an idea that I passed through The Iron Horde’s Shaman chat and it seemed relatively popular so I wished to propose it. But, however, given there is no blatant CRP advantage to having more Pacts as it stands, overall Shamanism rewrites are moving away from using Pacts as a major way to determine power/resources. Allowing Shamans to take more Pacts could encourage the worship of lesser Spirits via totems or increased character nuance. I have kept Kor and thus Lutaumancy at a whole slot, as it grants an entire in-depth magic with CRP advantages. This also makes standard spirit pacts in line with Animism, which is a pact with an Elemental, who are often described as being more powerful than Immortals. I will say, this isn't forcing anyone to take any new pacts, or nullify any marts that eat more slots, though, to my best knowledge, my own is the only one that does so in Shamanism, and is already compliant with this amendment idea.

Credits:
Evonpire - Author of Amendment
Panashea - Author of Original Lore

Citations

(Lutaumancy pending Guide approval)

Alright, I'm finally able to sit down. So, as said by Eoka in his post, this is supposed to be a revolution. I'm confused where his origin is; my guess would be Sulianpolis (Despite that not being a finished build), as it does have a sub region (Though, I'm its PRO and I'm not even sure if its supposed to have subregion given build rules, but I'm not completely sure how those function), but how this all works is very vague. Would Eoka have to win a WC in the Suli Tile before being able to do the capital?
 

Likewise, the RP legitimacy and integrity of this all seems very odd when you consider that Grubnakh the Wizard is an Olog. Which frankly seems a touch absurd that he should be capable of plotting a major plot or coup. He's made several forum posts indicating his want to coup, which again, seems weird given that its an Olog and is something he shouldn't be capable of, even if they have a NPC writing their posts IRPly. Which that alone seems like an awfully convenient way to play a full-intelligence Olog. This over all has left an extremely poor taste in my mouth in regards to the RP that is taking place. Likewise, I'd like some verification that an RP confirming the alleged alliance took place. Though even then, an Olog should not be able to plan such. But, that is an ST matter, I understand.

Then, it comes to the allies that Eoka has listed in their post, half of which are not even my playerbase/The Iron Horde, nor do I know who they are.

 

There seems to be a confusion, especially with the Warband of Mog. Given that it was something made/affiliated with The Iron Horde for the Vale-Hnor War. Which has no official standing/representation with the Horde currently, infact many of my playerbase do not like them for intruding on the "Mog" name, which was a previously existing Clan that merged into the Clan Akaal. I have no clue what the Friedrichian Band is. I've been provided the following screen shot by my leadership. I did not meet up with MisterBlitzkrieg irp, and my last discord message with him is giving him tile perms on jungle_step_4 for a player event. I was not made aware of its existence until about 3 days ago when I was passing it to give Blitzkrieg perms for his player event, he had perms to the capital from a previous horde-affiliated char I think . It might as well be considered a grief as far as I'm concerned, it has no subregion, which is further evidence I gave no PRO permission for this. Therefore, I think their eligibility should is put into question. I am able to comply with anything to help prove there is no RP affiliation with this group. Likewise "Followers of Grubnakh" is just very vague.

 

The Bronze-Band I understand completely, as they were apart of the Horde until I took the land following Roleplay. But, I feel their inclusion blurs the line between Rebellion and Revolution. Ultimately, I trust Moderation to verify the Players to make sure these are actually Horde players, and not goons who've picked up the characters in the past two weeks just for this and I will fight the Warclaim regardless.. But, I feel there is a certain dubiousness to this all that I wanted to raise.
 

Additionally, the matter of Pinemaw fighting is also in question. Given they did not declare until after the Warclaim post was made, and I am not sure of their current landed/affiliation with the Horde.

I have some thoughts to say and some more stuff to gather. But I am occupied on both those days with work. And I'd rather work out a compromise to have it on another day. 

MC Name:

         Evonpire

Character's Name:

         Kaiuz'Azog

Character's Age:

         91

Character's Race:

         Orc

What magic(s) will you be learning?

         Paladinism

Teacher's MC Name:

         Amelia of Ahad

Teacher's RP Name:

         Saffryie

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         No

Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

         Yes

42 minutes ago, Islamadon said:

[!] A Letter is delivered Post-Haste . . .
 

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Rex Kybal’Akaal "The Ram";

I, Ugokoyama Danzen, shall be issuing the reply on behalf of my greater country. The reasoning for this perceived slight by an underling of your defensive ally is simple: The Oni involved are my Brethren, my Wings and my Responsibility.

This in no way implies that I shall prostrate myself nor sell out my Clansmen nor the country of Nor-Velyth. In fact, it is the contrary.

As it stands in FACT, not fiction, three oathed and binded members of the Ugokoyama Clan had ventured to the sandy capital of the Orkish Horde with the intent of training in preparation for their fight against the Nether-Olog. Once arrived, they had come across a friend of the Oyashi people being beset upon by a lonesome Uruk - Brevias. Not one to allow a friend to be accosted without righteous action, they had intervened and engaged in a KLOMP. 

Amidst this battle a Short Honorary attempted to intervene himself, and screeched "RAID, RAID RAIIIIID!" In response, the Oni rightly beat him up for being stupid - for it was not a raid, and this short-man was simply squealing untruths. After the Uruk Brevias was defeated, in honor and in friendship both my Clansmen and the Uruk enjoyed a steak dinner as FRIENDS. And so closed the Nether-Gate, and the Heavenly-Gate opened.

This heavenly peace did not last long, due to an attempt by further Uruks to accost, enslave and murder - again - Friends of the Oyashi. These friends were Atemu-Ta and his Sister, who subsequently took her own life in defiance of imposed bondage. The Righteous Oni - Bound by the Code of Budo - would not stand for this. Such is the tenet of CHŪGI, and to step away after seeing such a distasteful scene would have besmirched their character so DEEPLY that they would have been better off joining her with ritual suicide.

 

It was then that the ring-leader of this Orkish altercation proclaimed "SLAY THEM ALL". This is a query indeed, for the implications of your proclamation imply that it were the Oyashi - In a MILITARY capacity - had engaged in an unprovoked attack upon the Horde. As the story plays out, it appears that it was in fact your own brothers, in a military capacity, who sentenced ours to DEATH. Then again, perhaps they were not deputized with such a power.

 

In response to the sentencing, the Ugokoyama-Oni opted to FIGHT, lest they willingly extend their necks as sacrificial cattle to be slain by beings of fragile Ego. Indeed, a further Klomp ensued, and the wrathful gang of Uruk began to vanish one after the other, though some were certainly slain. The most perplexing factoid of all of this is - following the altercation - it is reported that my Oni and your People embraced in a brotherly embrace, and of no ill-omen and friendship. 

 

It is now evident, after the fact, that there was quite handful of survivors from this ignoble Oyashi Aggression! Indeed, survivors so clairvoyant that they had managed to peer through their tears, bow before the Honorable Rex, and whine with such high pitch that they would now invoke WAR between our two peoples, when the righteous KLOMP had already settled the affair.

This matter has weighed upon my mind, and in contemplation I had comissioned the Samurai - Kato Eren - to paint me a depiction of the event so that I may remember the day that an Uruk need grovel before his Rex to seek vengeance for a fight he rightly lost.

 

In consequence, should your Country TRULY persist in the belief that the acts of the Ugokoyama Oni were without honor to the point where the Iron Horde would now exist in a state of war with the Nor'Velyth people, I offer this remedy: A duel between Ugokoyama Bata and the Ringleader, whose name betrays me. Regardless of the outcome, the matter shall be settled and no more tears shall be shed from either side.
 

UGOKOYAMA DANZEN

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i see orc. i am happy

The Banishment of Atemu-Ta

Spoken, on the 13th, of the Sun’s Smile, Year 150, of the Second Age, marked by the slaying of Gazardiel by Drekur’Ungri, and Murdok’Lak.

Sha-mog-ob Krug, Pukhl-Izg, Sha-gûkr-naakh-ob Krug, Izg-diisum, Sha-grizh-ob Krug, slai-izishu, khlaar-izish rad.

To  Atemu-Ta, I address this;

You and your allies have spilled not only my kin’s but my own Clan’s blood. Within the Horde, there is only one punishment for disturbing the Rex’s will, and the unhonourable slaying of an Orc, death. You are banished from the lands of the Ilzdalgumu and the goi of San’Brîu. The lands of Sulianpolis on the Dorazu'Kûkrank are considered forfeit and returned to the Rex’s direct governance and control as is the right of the sovereign of these sands.

Thus, by the Word of the Rex, I decree.

I. Atemu-Ta of Sulianpolis is banished from the Iron Horde under the penalty of execution via the blood eagle, displayed until their body rots. 

II. Unaffiliated Members of the Bronze Band may go freely, though will be treated as outsiders and will pay tribute to the Iron Horde.

III. The Lands of Sulianpolis will be returned to the Rex, for their actions, as well as unpaid taxes.

To my Allies:

We will not tolerate any attempts to hide this individual in your Realms. Any proof of such will be taken as a direct slight against the Rexdom and its lands. As well as the integrity of the Rex’s seat.

To Nor-Velyth:
 

I am owed an explanation as to why Oyashimans have attacked my kin with due haste. As it stands this act of aggression by your vassal is a direct violation of the Sol Entente agreement, and would typically be met with war. Given our history, I will allow an explanation to be given before I take further` action.

@Creete

Uruk ir-taar

Kybal’Akaal, “The Ram”, Azh-ob Zgur’thruk-al, Piz-ob Leyd, Groth-Uruk, zaabr-ob karn rar-ob Urin, A-Horde.

it was nice moderation-side for records, time and omni.

S E E K I N G  C H A R I T Y

(Artist: Unknown)

By the will of the Spirits, I have been petitioned to an act of Charity by the Lessers of Isuz, an odd task, but one which I will follow through without question, to prove my faith to them and the Ancestors. With Dazkur and Gentharuz guiding my Spear I am a capable Uruk, born of the proud Clan Azog, thus to complete my trial, I offer my spear, strength, hammer or whatever I can to one individual in order to complete an act of charity and earn the favour of my Spirit.
 

By the Fists of the Oldfather

Kaiuz, of Clan Azog

 

MC Name:

         Evonpire

Character's Name:

         Errvan

Character's Age:

         279

What feat(s) will you be learning?

         Herblore

Teacher's MC Name:

         Arcelia

Teacher's RP Name:

         t0nikensa

Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

         yes

Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         no

Are you aware that if this feat is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

         yes

Sacre bleu 

Just posting this to confirm my warpath, so that i don't forget (because i will)

orc go here
 

give me magic

I'm posting this on behalf the Warband of Mog, as they will represented by the Iron Horde Realm.

This is my Warpath

RP post
 

If Mods want logs to verify this was all done IRPly for whatever reason I will gladly help in whatever way I can.

The Rex of the Iron Horde reads this missive with sheer confusion and awe of this entire situation.

3/3

Gomoore has quit lotc or has not been present for a significant portion of time and is dropped, knowing how to Spirit Walk and Inflict Visions.