[Denied]Marina's Re-Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

 

The simplest section of the application. Answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit more. Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - My account name is jojoismycat (In the past I didn’t have good taste in usernames..In irl I’m called Marina)

How old are you?: -  17

Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: - play.edawg878.com

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - I have, http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/113876-marinas-application/

 

How did you hear about us?: - I was looking for role-play servers and was strongly intrigued by this server.

What do you think the server will be like? - I think it will be fun and creative with interesting story plots and twists.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: - “Player harassment, blackmailing or discrimination of any kind is forbidden” is definitely the rule I agree with the most.

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:- Yes

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):- No

 

Definitions

 

These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: - Roleplaying is  when you act things out by typing/saying actions.

 

What’s metagaming?: - Metagaming is use of out of game knowledge against players

 

What’s powergaming?: - Powergaming is basically forcing actions against another player. An example: “Slices her in half”

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

What’s your character called?: - Her name is Artemis, she is not the goddess they just have the same name.

 

What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): - She is a Wood Elf.

 

What gender are they?: - Female.

 

How old are they?: -  She is 20.

 

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): - 

 

What are they like? (personality): - She is very energetic and wise, because her father owned many ancient books which she has read at least 2 times in her life, she is also adventurous and down to earth. Her past was dull, and she longed for adventure. She lived with her father in a small cottage in the middle of the forest, but her father has passed. The death of her only companion overwhelmed her with grief so she left behind all of her belongings except for some clothing and food and set off into the wilderness. She made her way into the town of Aegis and decided to make a home for herself there, though she has always had a pull to go back into the forest..

 

What are their ambitions?: - Her ambition is to become a baker but she will eventually isolate herself into the forest.

 

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): - Her skills include cooking and greenery, and her weaknesses include hand-to-hand combat and she cannot properly wield a sword.

 

Give us a description of how they look?: - Dirty blonde(eventually brown) hair, blue eyes, blue dress with gold accents.

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/3549741/elf/ I did make this skin myself. It might change into a different skin, I make all my own skins. (I added the elf ears! :D)

 

 

Good luck and thank you for applying to the server!

Note: I am out of town, it is only a few hours ahead from where I normally live, so for me it's been 24 hours.

[Daisy 9739]

Denied.

 

Your metagaming definition is incorrect, and the powergaming one could use some work. Please refer the the definitions located on our wiki, but do not plagiarize.

 

Please separate your personality and biography into the two questions, not just one.

 

Aegis was not a town, but an entire world which was abandoned by the mortal races nearly 150 years ago. Your character would not have even existed then.

 

Your biography is significantly lacking in lore. Our wiki contains most of the lore, and more than enough to apply with. I suggest you start reading. Add things such as people, places, events and racial or cultural lore.

 

Your biography is quite short and generally lacks detail. Please expand upon it.

 

Wood elves do not generally have blue eyes.

 

You may re-apply inn 24 hours. Good luck, and PM me if you have any questions. I would be glad to help.

[Daisy 9739]

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