[Denied]Hille´s Application

[Hille 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

The simplest section of the application. Answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit more. Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Halrak

How old are you?: 24

Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: No

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): No

 

How did you hear about us?: I was searching for Lord of the Rings Mod Server and the saerch engine gave me your homepage - i started reading and found it interesting. Now i m trying it :)

What do you think the server will be like? I dont know. I watched a lot of videos but i cannot really say how it will be like.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Respecting each other and separate IC and OOC

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?: Yes

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I hope i understod everything. If not i ll ask when i ll have any problems or lack of information.

 

Definitions

 

These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Playing the role of a character who is part in a big world. But he is not the hero of this world. He is only a part of it like all the other characters too.

 

What’s metagaming?: Cheating. Something like using OOC knowledge and us it IC.

 

What’s powergaming?: Playing to become a hero or a character with super powers

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

What’s your character called?: Hal Rak

 

What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): Dark Elf

 

What gender are they?: Male

 

How old are they?: 166

 

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.):

Hal Rak is not talking about his past to strangers. 

Only true friends got the whole story of his past and the reason why he left the caves of his family and community - and leaving the family is not so common for dark elves.

Out in the wilderness he could live alone for a long time without the constant prescene of any other beeing.

In this time he closed his mind for others, also his feelings, thoughts and believes changed.

Nevertheless he was no hermit. He can life with people, he can talk with them and also enjoyes their company - but there is always this strange feeling.

One day, while doing his job as courier, something went teribbly wrong .. and he woke up laying on the ground in a forest nearby a city.

Everything was hurting and he hardly tried to remember but only a few thoughts came up in his mind.

Unfortunatly none of them could help him finding who he are, why everything hurts and what the hell he was doing in the near of a city he do not know!

So he deciededt o go to the city. Maybe someone knows him... and if not ... then he maybe has to ask if someone knows him.

But when he entered the city he only got strange views from the people - he felt really bad.

Fortunatly while he was walking through the city some more memories came back!

Some details about him, his name, only partially his familly - those memories about his family made him feel ... bad, a weird feeling and he knew that something happend between them and him (and because of his long time alone he changed so deeply that also a lack of memories cannot erase those feelings)... and flashbacks, short flashbacks with strange situations.

He saw the town by night. Giving something to a man. Guards. Then mountains. A huge underground cave. Elves, who look like him. He was talking with them. Fighting training. Recieving .. something. Talking to ... a man, an elf ... in the forest. Dwarfs, fighting with ... elves, orcs. The town again. Fire, shadows, water ... His head started hurting again.

He couldn´t connect all those flashbacks to a big picture - he would need more time.

But those flashbacks told him that he got something from an elf in the forest that he had to delievered to someone. 

He does not know if it is the forest he woke up or another one, the name of the elf or the man, the stuff he had to transport.

But hopefully in a few days more memories will come back again and then he will be able to find the elf or the man!

 

What are they like? (personality): Friendly (maybe too friendly), he first tries to argue then fight, quiet but when there is the need..., private regarding some parts of his past he still knew, sometimes strange behaviour with other people because of his long time alone

 

What are their ambitions?: Getting back his memories. Finding the elf and the man in his flashbacks

 

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): 

Weaknesses: 

Because of his friendly behaviour he is sometimes easily convinceble to do something also if it is not his duty.

 

Skills: 

He has a trained body which allows him to travel long distances, carry more than others and provide him with more strength.

But to be able to have this body and endurance he has to do mostly a daily training.

But his better abilities do not lead to better using of weapons or something like this.

 

Give us a description of how they look?: black hair, green eyes, he has a typically darker skin

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: http://imgur.com/0P14F0O

[Friendly Guy 223]

1. Please include more weakness into your Character, Thing such as "Did he ever learn to swim". 
"Is he scared of heights"

2. Your Bio is very hard to follow please include more structure aswell include town's /Places you can find that information in the wiki

3. Your definitions are incorrect please rephrase and add examples for clarity.

[Friendly Guy 223]

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