[Denied]My Application (Sheriffalan1)

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Out-Of-Character Information

 

The simplest section of the application. Answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit more. Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  sheriffalan1

How old are you?: - 14

Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: -no 

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - no

 

How did you hear about us?: - I looked on minecraftservers.com

What do you think the server will be like? - AWESOME SAUCE

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: - No Griefing (I've been there before)

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:-Yes

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):-none at all

 

Definitions

 

These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: -  Pretending to be a character

 

What’s metagaming?: -IDK 

 

What’s powergaming?: - gaming for a long time

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

What’s your character called?: - Kai

 

What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): - Elf

 

What gender are they?: - Male

 

How old are they?: - 24

 

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): - He was born in  Haelun'or, and his parents were killed by orc raiders. he then joined The Mages Guild and trained to become a Sorcerer and kill all the orcs in Athera!

 

What are they like? (personality): - He is a family man, but when it comes to orcs, he goes full ballista

 

What are their ambitions?: - Kill All The Orcs

 

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): - He can turn Orc blood into stone, and when a blade made by Pure Orcanium touches him, he will be dead for 24 hours

 

Give us a description of how they look?: - He always wears his Mage robes, red eyes, and he is half corrupted by Orcanium (an Orcish metal)

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - 

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Your application has been denied.

• Your role-playing definition needs to be expanded on.
• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect.
• Please avoid having your parents killed by orcs; it's very overused.
• You need to expand on your biography. I want 1-2 paragraphs.
• You are not allowed to apply to the server knowing magic.
• You are not allowed to turn orc blood into stone.
• As far as I know, there is no metal on our server called Orcanium that corrupts people.

You may re-apply in 24 hours. Feel free to PM me with any questions you may have.

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