[Denied]Application Submissions

[Branden 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:ti6er

How old are you?: 10

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: no hacking

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): confuseing server lore

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: something that acts powerfull and the behavior

What is metagaming?: talking out of chat puposely to tell the location and what they doing

What is powergaming?: something that you focus

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Arktane jason

Character’s gender: man

Character’s race: human

Character’s age: 70

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Once there was a long long peace  until the orcs arrive to the city they crashed eveything such as Arktane house then he found a dark healing magic it healed eveyone such as his family now he is famus because of this year.

Personality Traits: smart, good, brave, curious

Ambitions: to be a legendary mage

Strengths/Talents: strong against eveything it sep elves

Weaknesses/Inabilities: weak against elves and darkness

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): height 20 and weight 10

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 2014-12-23_01.26.15.png

[Readicti 902]

• On your confusion- if you message me, I can answer any questions you may have on server lore.
• Your roleplaying definition is wrong.
• Your metagaming is sort of right but too specific.
• Expand on your powergaming definition.
• Your biography is short and doesn't have any server lore.
• It's cliche to have orcs attack your town and not allowed.
• You cannot know magic before coming to the server, so you cannot find dark magic to heal. If you want to know magic, you can find a teacher on the server once you've been accepted.
• You cannot be famous because once you are on the server, no one would know who you are.
• Expand on your ambitions and make it more realistic. You will not be a legendary mage but you might be able to make this something like, learning magic or a goal that you can actually reach.
• Being strong against everything as a strength is powergaming and needs to be changed.
• Being weak against elves and the dark are not good weaknesses. Try to think of physical inabilities, personality flaws, fears, ect.
• You failed to include a screenshot of your character's skin. 

[Readicti 902]

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