[Denied][Pending] Masterpr01 Whitelist App

[Masterpr01 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Masterpr01 (with zero its looks like o) in this type
How old are you?:16
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):I am high school student. second class.
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/121292-masterpr01-whitelist-app/
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Trolling
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?
my friend suggested.
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?:Playing like another person in game.İt can be a elven or dwarf or anything.(I am from turkey I cant exactly translate)
What is metagaming?:if you use your out of character knowledge in game.That will be Metagaming.Example :You know your enemy weakness in ooc but you are using this in your caharacter.
What is powergaming?:if your character isn't phsically able to do an action and you arre doing it .its powergaming.

Character’s name:Harthol_Ligthsword
Character’s gender:male
Character’s race:human
Character’s age:20
Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
His father was a blacksmith in Pethrus. Harthol grows up in a village with his mother. After years his father came back to home and became a blacksmith. Harthol and his cousin Urias worked in blacksmith. They learnt everything about weapons. These days were best parts of Harthol's life. After that the time has come for Urias to go back to home.

3 years later, Harthol's father became ill and died. Harthol and his mother left the village and they lived in other places. It was hard to live at those times. One day, while Harthol was working in a blacksmith, a halfling caravan comes. He sees his cousin in caravan and he joins his cousin. They start to live in the caravan. One night their caravan trapped in a bandit ambush and they took Urias with them. Harthol becomes upset and desperate and he leaves the caravan.Harthol started the live in gimblewood with halflings. He becomes poor and lives at streets and wild.He decides to go Pethrus.One day he sees his cousin in Pethrus. His cousin was resides in a street and looks poor. He meets with Urias again and they started a great advanture.
Personality Traits:Rude for strangers-Talkative-reliable-curios-He loves making something.
Ambitions:He wants to travel and see new places.Because he always lived in small vilages.He wants see wonderful places and big cities.
Strengths/Talents:Crafting-Using Sword-Trading
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Reading-Killing inocents-Womans-teamwork
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):Standart weight and height.Dark eyes and dark long hair.(loks like jason newsted)
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://mcskinsearch....skin/Masterpr01

[Overland 349]

Pending

Your application has been put on pending, please make the requested changes within 24 hours to be accepted. Please private message me once you have done so.

• All three of your definitions are still rather short. Your power-gaming one is also still incorrect. Please use the roleplay meaning, not the RPG meaning.
• Your biography contains little server lore; the wiki http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ contains all the information you need. 
• Your skin screenshot no longer works.

Feel free to private message me with any questions or concerns you have regarding your application or the server.

Denied

Inadequate changes were made, please reapply after 24 hours.

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