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[TheBomberman1999 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft ACCOUNT Name?: TheBomberman1999

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/121721-pending-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No hacks, because it's unfair!

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No, Ι understand everything.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A friend told me about the server.

 

Definitions

Feel FREE to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: It's when you play as another person, like a role. You become someone else in order to play that role.

What is metagaming?: It's when your character gets information about something without being able to get that info in roleplaying.

What is powergaming?: Like when you go against a player , and you don't give him time to react.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Angel

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Wood Elf

Character’s age: 70

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): 

 Came to Athera at a young age with his parents and settled at the city of Annil'sul . There he practised with the sword and became really good at melee combat . But then the goverment of the city , the Silver Enclave was overthrown . His wood elf family had no problem with it . They made their home there and his father , Aristides ( who was a blacksmith) gave his armour and told Aggelos to join the city's military . And so Aggelos did . After some time , his mother Flora got a disease and died . His father , focused on perfecting his proffesion and left his son alone . Aggelos without anyone to turn for help , became a really close person , unsocial , full of anger . 

When the Silver Enclave took the city back , Aggelos had to leave the city since he was a wood elf . He arrived at the city of  Laureh'lin but noticed that his father wasnt there . There , he joined the city's military again since he only knew how to wield a sword and nothing more . He stayed there for some time but decided to leave because he felt an emptiness in his heart. At Cloud Temple , he met Ioannis Komninus , a wood elf with the same emptiness in his heart . There , they spoke for hours and decided to carry on together . Now together , in a new settlemend , the town of Athenis , they try to fill that emptiness .

 

Personality Traits: unpatiend, clever, nervous, divious, unsocial

Ambitions: To fill the emptiness in his heart. 

Strengths/Talents: Good with the sword, can wear heavy armour

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Not good at all with bow, not good stamina

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 1.90 meters and 90 kilos

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-Your power-gaming definition is incorrect.

 

-You need to improve your meta-gaming defintion. Maybe use an example?

 

-Your character's biography is incoherent and hard to understand.

 

-You dont explain what happened before he was at Athera. Where did he live? What did he do?

 

-You need to expand upon alll your character's information.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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