[Denied]Steave132's Application Request

[steave132 1]

Hello, my name is steave132 and I'd just like to start off the application by thanking you for giving your time to read my application.

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: steave132

How old are you?:  13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am aware.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No I have not.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I have read, and agree that they are fair.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I'd say the no sexual content rule is pretty important because it is a pg-13 game.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):  I understand all the rules except for what text-base combat and mechanic-base combat is.

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Planet Minecraft.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:  In my opinion, roleplaying is acting as a unique, fictional charecter, with distinctive abilities.

 

What is metagaming?:  In my opinion, metagaming is a game that involves thinking, tactics, strategy, and patience.

 

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is basicly doing something to a player you wouldn't do in real life.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Lee Sentoki (Sentoki if we need last names)

 

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Kha'Pantera

Character’s age: 32

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Lee Sentoki, a young Kharajyr, on his own, since he turned 8, after his parents died by the Undead. After surviving on his own, no one to trust, his hatred grew and became more engraged each day.

 

At the age of 22 Lee got a job as a farmer, though he was paid fair, he was forced to do various thefts to afford himself and his bestfriend, Darel the pig. After 10 years of preparing for his voyage to Al'Khazar it was Lee's 32nd birthday. Lee decided to go out to the market and get some soup and wheat. After a month of Darel having a severe flu, he died moments after Lee returned. Loosing his bestfriend, his parents, and his trust for almost anyone, Lee set off to Al'Khazar, to gain vengence, but what lies ahead on this expedition is far more then he would have imagined.

 

Personality Traits: Small temper, Hardly trusts strangers, but has a soft spot for animals.

 

Ambitions: To gain revenge on the Undead.

Strengths/Talents: Stealth, Far range, Speed, Bows, Stealing.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Heavy armor, Heights, Dual weilding, Mining.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6"1 Weight : 254 Dark Fur

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin: Link  http://prntscr.com/6dm87g

[Tirenas 677]

Please fix the following upon reapplying:

• Your definition of powergaming and metagaming are incorrect.
• Losing your character's parents and wanting to get revenge is incredibly cliche, please remove that.
• Your character's name isn't really fitting of a Kha.
• Al'Khazar is the human city from Aegis and it doesn't make sense that we're in Athera yet you're from Aegis. Also, your character is a Kha and it wouldn't make sense if he was from a human city.

[Tirenas 677]

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