[Denied] Application Test

[GeorgeKing10 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: __George__

 

How old are you?: 15

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

 

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No powergaming

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No.

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:The Act of taking on a persona and acting out their actions whether it be in person, Typing, or in a Game.

What is metagaming?: Using OOC Info for IC Information and using it to anyway, whether it be to your advantage or not.

What is powergaming?:Making it impossible for ones self to have any negative outcome in any situation.

 

 

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: George

 

Character’s gender: Male

 

Character’s race: Human

 

Character’s age: 15

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): My Name is George . i was Born in Littel Village Called Caravel i was Young we were living in peace but 1 day bad factions and people came they wanted to burn our villige and then a fight started my Father went to fight and he told my mother to take me and hide somewhere Safe i was little kid then a few Bad people from the factions followed us then my mother found a cave and she told me dont move and left me there and she ran to make them go away.

 

After Few hours i started crying becasue i was alone then a Man heard the crying Sound and found me in small hole they he took me to his to his small house and we lived together, when i become 10 years He taught me how to fight and to find food kill mobs all the survival basics and when i became ready i left the house to start my journey.

 

 

Personality Traits:  Brave, Protective , Kind, Strong

 

Ambitions: To have a family and to make the world better 

 

Strengths/Talents:  Archer , Good at surviving , Pro Pvp ( Swords ) , Runner 

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: i dont have weaknesses and i can do anything 

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://imgur.com/Vp513kL

 

 

[MamaBearJade 2090]

 

 

Your definitions were plagiarized from an accepted application. You need to write them in your own words. If you plagiarize again you will receive a ban from applying.

 

While you work on your application during your 24 hour wait, I would like you to fix the following as well.

 

You can not apply as a character under the age of 18

Being an orphan is not bad, but the way you are orphaned is very cliche and needs to be fixed

You have no server lore in the application. I would advise reading up on humans on the wiki and forums

Your bio is very short, I would spend time explaining events a little

Your app has a lot of spelling and grammatical errors. I advise having someone read it over before you post

"Pro PVP" is not an RP skill, that is a mechanic that you can use, please remove this.

Your character must have weaknesses, to not have weaknesses is powergaming

Your weaknesses must balance out strengths.

 

 

You may reapply 24 hours from this post. If you have any questions comments or concerns, feel free to reply to my PM. I am willing to work with you on your application.

[MamaBearJade 2090]

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