Teaspoon 13 Share Posted June 29, 2015 Out-Of-Character Information Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:XTeaspoonX How old are you?:15 Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): https://www.lordofthecraft.net/user/73204-teaspoon/ click on the topics and my previous app are there. Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no powergaming, no cyberbullying. Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My friend told me. Definitions Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! What is roleplaying?: Pretending to be someone your not and acting like the would in the world and with people around them. What is metagaming?: Using information that your caricature wold never have for example; Your a random human roaming the country side, minding your own business when suddenly you spot a band of orc raiders heading for your city! You quickly /msg your captain and tell him that an invasion is on its way and to be prepared. What is powergaming?: Making your player all powerful and undefeatable. For example;You are a random elf who is walking on the street you walk by a goblin who throws an insult at you and you clinch your fist in anger. You type in chat *random elf begins to glow and a great power is emitted from his body, he looks at the goblin and the poor devils soul is burned leaving but a pile of ash. the poor goblin had no chance. In-Character Information Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play. Character’s name:Teaspoon Character’s gender: male Character’s race:Kharajyr Character’s age:10 Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): "Munna will you tell me a story before i go to sleep?" I asked as i snuggled down into my warm woolen bed."What do you want to hear about?" asked my Munna,"How you and Patta meet each other.""well your Patta was a kha Pantera who was in the group called the moon blades. As a small cub he was trained to be a quick and stealthy assassin and thief. Ever since he was a small cub your Patta always wanted more, but being a moon blades was all he new, what else could their be? The years past and my Patta grue to be one of the finest warriors and assassins the moon blades had ever seen, but he was young and recluse.One day when my Patta was about 28 years of age a prisoner was brought to the barracks to be kept under close guard. A thief by the name of Santi,"that's you Munna! "yes that's right little one, now where was i,aah yes." who had been terrorizing small islands and villages off the cost of karakatua. The thief was kept under close guard and hie security.Having guards rotated their shift every two hours. Patta was given the late evening shift, as he walked down the mossy stone stair case that led to the dungeon and around the corridor to the cell that held the imprisoned occupant, he was shocked to see that the prisoner that he had been assigned to guard was a female! Suddenly he felt very strange like he never had before but he wasn't sick no! This was a wonderful feeling and he never wanted it to leave him. A bit clumsily he took his post and tried not to make eye contact with the prisoner." Whats a madder with me!" he thought. He straightened up and tried to stay focused on his job, (witch he was beginning to like more and more every moment).As the days went on the two became eventually talked became friends and then more. Patta would some times sneak a bit more extra food or sometimes a flower to his new beloved friend. Both knowing well that if they were caught they would both be punished severely and for Santi most likely death, or worse. One day My Patta told Santi of a plan to help her escape and they would run away together and live how they wished. And so that night My Patta stole the key to Santi's cell and for the first time they embraced. Quickly and quietly they snuck down the hall up the staircase passed the sleeping guard who watched the entrance to the dungeon, out into the courtyard and over the wall to a small skiff that My Patta had waiting to take them away. They sailed very far away until they came to a very small island that was covered in large jungle trees and much flora. Patta blit my Santi a house in the trees where they lived happily and had many adventures steeling and plundering the nearby villages." "then i was born right Munna?" asked little Teaspoon,"Yes and then you were born my Per." She said her voice drifting as she said it. Her face then began to look grim as if she had remembered something shed rather not have remembered. But then she smiled and said to her Per, "sleep well my cub." and blew out the candle and then climbed the later down stares.The truth was Santi did not tell her young son the entire story.You see after Santi and Dreko(Patta) sailed far far away together they did indeed build a house in the trees and had many adventures together stealing and plundering as they liked, and stole whatever they desired. But somethings you can never truly steel and one of those things is a child. Santi and Dreko longed for a child and had waited and prayed to Metztli for a offspring, but they never had one. Until a few years after the fall of the Kharajyr Empire, Wile surveying a village for potential loot they stopped at a tavern to order some rum for themselves.Derko whispered to Santi,"Go out to the ally and see if their is a back door or large window that we can slip in through tonight. I think that this establishment will be quite profitable." Santi smiled and got up and went out side and slipped into the ally. She observed the back of the building carefully, looking for some small opining or week place in the wall. As she did this a ancient figure dressed in a black robe approached her. He said,"There's a small hatch underneath that create beside the wall there." Startled she looked at the figure curiously,"How did he now that i was looking for a way in?" she asked herself."Under that crate their look and you will see what i have told you is true." curiously she moved the crate and sure enough there was a small hatch! "How did you now about this hatch,How did you now i was looking for it!?" "I now many things, one of them being that you and your Munn wish for a child of your own but are unable to have one." Santi looked shocked for a moment and then a bit angry,"Who was this person and why did he now so much and what did he want?" The hooded figure's almost covered face reveled a smile and he said,"What if i told you i could give you a child?" Santi scoffed disgusted," I may be a thief but i have no dealings with baby snatchers!" "Why my dear who said anything about that, no i mean a child of your very own." Santi dumbfounded a child, of her very own? "How?" she asked,"I happen to now how to make a potion that can give you the child you so desire." "And you would give me this concoction for free?" the hooded stranger chuckled to himself,"Of course not you off all people now that nothing comes without price." "What is it then that you want?" she asked."When the child is of the age of ten years of age i will return to you and you will give the child back to me." Santi stood there speechless not knowing if this could somehow be a dream or maybe she had a bit to much to drink. Beginning to become impatient the hooded figure turned to go and said almost nonchalantly ,"But if ten years is not long enough then i am sorry it must be ten." "Ill do it!". Santi said almost not thinking her face now desperate. The hooded stranger smiled again that half covered smile and said,"Good." He then reach into a small satchel that was hanging by his side and brought out a bottle containing a dark blue-ish purple liquid and he placed it into Santi's out stretched hands and looked her straight in the face reveling his wrinkled and ancient face,"Ten years and i will come to take the child." She nodded her head and then he turned and was gone. Santi stood their in the alleyway clutching the precious bottle, her eyes far off and in a daze. Suddenly she realized that Dreko was still waiting for her. She held the bottle close to her chest and herded back inside the tavern. She made her way back to where Dreko was siting, "What took so long?" he asked with an eyebrow raised,"I had to wait for some people to git out of the ally first but i found a way in." She hid the potion under her cloak she din't want Derko to now what she had done."Good good!" Derko said smiling "Then we shall have good business tonight." That night they snuck through the hatch and did indeed make a good profit, so much so they had enough to finish their house in the tree tops. As they gracefully glided atop the roof tops back to their small ship Santi lagged a bit behind and when she thought that Derko was fare enough ahead she slipped into the shadows and downed the potion(witch gave her a bit of indigestion afterwords.) Many moons past and Derko began to notes that Santi was her agile self, and pretty soon it was't hard to tell, she was pregnant. Derko was overjoyed when he found out and praised the moon goddess. But Santi never told Derko how she came to have a child. After nine mounts of pregnancy Santi and Derko's cub was born a male, tho his appearance was very different then any thing they had ever seen before. The cub had fer that was black as night like his father but had strange colored makings all over his body and very large ears. Contrary to his appearance Santi and Derko loved their Per More than any thing in the hole of the world. At a young age the cub took a liking to shinny things, particularly spoons, and so they decided to call him Teaspoon. As Teaspoon grew his Patta thought him how to fight and hunt and how to care for flora and treat the forest with respect. His Munna showed him the art o stealth and quick thinking. She also showed Teaspoon how to cook and clean and be respectable. And so we come back to were we left off before with Santi who had jest said good night to her Per. Santi walked across the ruf wood floor t a small table were Derko was sitting, he had a grave look on is face. "why didn't you tell me." He said slowly,"I was afraid that... that you would't want me to drink it." Santi said with shame. "Are you sure he's coming?" Derko asked,"We shall see for tomorrow is Teaspoon's Birth day." Personality traits:Curious always wanting to learn, Most of the time happy but i have temper. Ambitions:"To be jest like my Munna and Patta and to do the will of Metztli" Strengths/Talents: Familiar with most weapons, i am an amiture in the art of steth and my Munna is teaching me how to cook and be neet. Weaknesses/Inabilities: i have a temper, has weakness to light magic, there is a darkness inside me, and i cannot always control it,I am a bit short . Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lvke 1000 Share Posted June 29, 2015 -Although you have a lot of server lore in regards to Kha, you still are missing quite a few aspects of actual Kha lore that are essential in regular dealings, such as their accents. -Your application is illegible. -Learn to format. -Learn to spell. -Your weaknesses do not outweigh your strengths, and aren't even weaknesses. -I can't even tell what tour skin is. -You cannot apply at an age lower than eighteen. -I have no idea about your actual character. -Teaspoons is not an appropriate name. -The grounds of your character's birth aren't really legit with server lore. -Clichéd master assassin-warrior-thief parents that teach you everything. -Ten year olds cannot be familiar with most weapons, let alone be extremely experienced. -Light magic isn't a thing. If you have any questions, please feel free to PM me over the forums. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lvke 1000 Share Posted June 29, 2015 Moved to Denied Application Forum. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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