[Denied] My Application

[PokeU 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: PokeU

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Nope

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Having no reason to battle.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A friend of mine told me about this server.

 

 

 

Character’s name: Poke 

 

Character’s gender: Male

 

Character’s race: Human, and if I have to add the sub race thing I pick Highlander

 

Character’s age: 19

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Poke was born on February 13, 1201. He was born in a village called Blue Tree. Poke lived in a small village with his family. He was part of the richest family in the world. Poke loved to go to the dojo to practice his sword fighting. He was the best in his class. One day, bandits came and destroyed his village. Poke tried to fight them off but he was too young. Poke almost died but was lucky enough to be knocked out. At the time Poke was only 7 years old. The bandits killed off his family and took their money. From that day forth he swore to get revenge on those bandits that took his life away. He promised to become the worlds greatest swordsman.

          Around age 10 Poke went back to his destroyed village to check it out. He blanked the entire village in his sight and walked mainly towards his old house. He looked around, found some old family paintings and such and started to cry. He went into his basement and found a strange hole in the wall. He looked at it for a second and then put his hand through it. All of a sudden, a secret door opened in the wall. He walked in and found an armory. He looked around a little bit amazed at what he was looking at, and then he noticed a sword standing out in front of all the others. There was a note on the floor below the sword. The note read "Poke, I want you to have this sword and use it during combat." "I found this sword on my great adventures in a deep cavern." "And its name is PyroFury." "Love you son" -Lancaeron. Poke grabbed the sword and waved it around testing its weight and speed. He dropped the sword on accident and as it hit the ground it left a 2 foot deep hole in the ground. Poke tied the sword to his waist, got back on his horse, and went to become the greatest swordsman and leader the world has ever seen.

 

 

Personality Traits: Aggressive and smart in battle.

 

Ambitions: Being the best king and swordsman in the world. 

 

Strengths/Talents: Swordsmanship and leading others.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Being stealthy.

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Weight: 145 height 5,6

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://imgur.com/dlXFfEs

[Lvke 1000]

-Stick to the format. You're missing all your definitions.

-You have no server lore.

-Your backstory is cliché by the standards of any section of literature.

-Such a sword would not exist outside of a major server event.

-Your character is extremely overpowered.

-Nothing really about you character at all.

 

This almost seems like a joke application in many ways with the blatant disregard for even the full application form.

[Lvke 1000]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.