[Denied] My Application Please Accept :)

[PokeU 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: PokeU

 

How old are you?: 14

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

 

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): This is my 2nd time :/

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Destructive hacks such as kill aura, auto-mining, and free-cam, though there are many more. Approved add-ons will be listed [here].

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I couldn't find any fun minecraft servers and a friend of mine told me about this one and it caught my interest XD

 

Character’s name: Phoenix Phexides

 

Character’s gender: Male

 

Character’s race: Highlander

 

Character’s age: 21

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): 

 

Phoenix Phexides was born in a village known as Bluetree located in the Dark Mountains. His mother, Athena Phexides, died giving birth to Phoenix. Before Phoenix’s  birth his father, Lancaeron Phexides, died in battle against a group of orcs. Since both his parents died, Phoenix had to live with his aunt and uncle who loved him very much. At a young age around 10 Phoenix began training with swords and became excellent. Phoenix grew up with many friends around him. His best friends name was Wilmaer. Phoenix and Wilmaer would get extremely bored and make funny stories to keep each other entertained. They also talked about adventuring together some day and exploring the world. Phoenix’s uncle taught him how to forge weapons as a blacksmith. He thought it was amazing how sharp a sword can be.

 

One day around age 14, Phoenix and Wilmaer were out hunting for deer in the woods. Wilmaer found a deer and was prepared to shoot it. Right before he shot his arrow 3 others shot into the deer. On the other side of the dead deer was an army of orcs ready to take out Bluetree. The orcs noticed them and chased them back to Bluetree. And there the orcs began to raid the village. Phoenix and Wilmaer knew they had to help fight off the orcs. They attacked the orcs with their village and stood beside each other in battle. They were doing good and looked like they were winning. Phoenix turned around to help Wilmaer. But right as he turned around, Wilmaer fell to the ground with an arrow through his chest, Phoenix cried knowing he would not live. Before Wilmaer died he said to Phoenix "Promise me you will become a great swordsman." Both Phoenix and Wilmaer filled up with tears. Then Wilmaer gently set his head down and died. With rage Phoenix got up and killed around 3 orcs. The orcs fled knowing they would lose. The village defended well and won the battle. But Phoenix's best friend Wilmaer died. Around 5 years later Phoenix was about 19. He began to pack up getting ready to adventure. His aunt and uncle knew he couldn't stay long. They wanted him to explore the world. Wilmaer talked about exploring Vailor with Phoenix so that was going to be Phoenix's destination. Phoenix set off with his horse and was ready to live his life as an adventurer and swordsman.

 

 

 

Personality Traits: Kind, Agressive, Adventurous, Fair, Charming, Dependable

 

Ambitions: To keep his promise at being a great swordsman.

 

Strengths/Talents: Sword fighting, Designing, Blacksmithing, Farming, Mining

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Writing, Anger control, Lazy, Impatient

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Height: 5,6      Weight: 195    Green eyes, slightly tan skin, brown hair, a lot of muscle.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere): http://imgur.com/9rWfmnW

[Overland 349]

Unfortunately your application has been denied, please reapply after 24 hours with the requested changes made.

• You forgot to add the defintion questions.
• Your biography contains little server lore and the Dark Mountains is not a real place, you must use real locations such as those found on this wiki page (http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Athera)
• How did your character manage to kill 3 Orcs around the age 14 out of rage? It is overused and makes no sense.

[Overland 349]

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