[Denied] Shadow_Kittenz Applocation

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Shadow_Kittenz

How old are you?: 12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes I am aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes I have read the rules

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I Agree with the  Cyber bullying  one

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):  no they all make since

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Searching on the web

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:To act and speak as if you are the character you're portraying. To roleplay is as much about what not to say as what TO say. It means to keep your speech in the context of the setting in which your character (or avatar) exists. Context can be defined as both time and place.

What is metagaming?:The act of using outside or previously gained knowledge within a gaming universe for personal gain or advantage

What is powergaming?:or power gaming) is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems, particularly video games, boardgames, and role-playing games, with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal, to the exclusion of other considerations such as storytelling, atmosphere and camaraderie.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:  Phoenix

Character’s Gender: Female

Character’s race: Elf

Character’s age: 13

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Phoenix is the only child. She lives with her mother until she died from the previous War. Phoenix adventured all over the land to live all by her self until she found a friend.

 Her mother was found dead by the river Phoenix lived by, and people thought that Phoenix killed her own mother.  Phoenix tried to tell everyone but they did not believe her, so Phoenix moved to a mystical land called

lord of the craft. Where Phoenix lived forever. 

Personality Traits: Adventurous, Neat, Cute, Archer, Athletic, Artistic

Ambitions:  wanted to be alone from all the mean people in the world

Strengths/Talents:  Archery

Weaknesses/Inabilities: creepers

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height: 12 1 inches Weight: 10 lbs

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

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I have found this application to contain content that was copied from an outside source. I have discovered that the roleplaying, metagaming and powergaming definitions were plagiarized and thus I am labeling this application as a plagiarized application. We do not take lightly to un-original work and content, I will thus be leaving you off with a warning and will be instantly denying your application.

This is really important, try and answer the questions in your own words! The problem is, copy-pasting definitions doesn't even get you the right answer!

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

Please lengthen your Biography out to a longer length. I am looking for around the size of two paragraphs. As an idea incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character’s development to their current standpoint. Not a lot, but a bit more!

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for elves can be found on the Wiki here! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant event.

See, you talk about a war killing the mother of your character; look for one that might fit at the time. Mention the lands which your character traveled! Your character cannot have been from a far-off land, needs to be born in the Lord of the Craft world (currently Vailor).

Your personality traits are not skills -- so you don't need archery there.

Explain your ambition in the bio; why does your character think the world is filled with so many mean people?

Choose a couple more strengths - and change your character's weaknesses. Creepers do not exist in Lord of the Craft.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request given above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around the time of 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

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