[Denied] [Pending] Riveris

[Riveris 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Riveris

How old are you?: 17

Time zone: US midwest

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with the "No cyber bullying" rule the most.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Not really. ill ask if I am

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I searched for Minecraft RP Servers on youtube. found your page. saw your lore. 

 

 

What is roleplaying?: a partnership and group of friends creating a story in a massive rp can create a ripple effect creating a whole new adventure changing every step of the way.

What is metagaming?:   when a character is used out of roleplay to get more informatoin that they are not supposed to know 

What is powergaming?:   When someone trys to maximizes story telling environments while pushing for a serten goal

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                                

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Character’s name: Riveris

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 20

Biography :Born in the  Reformed kingdom of Oren His father a heartlander  who was a guard and mother a highlander who was a blacksmith. He was the baby of the family. his older sister brashire moved on to become a mage. He wanted to join a army. Getting a basic education of reading, writing and math up to  moderate algebra  excelling in history.  At home he was taught how to fight. with a sword and shield as well as basic survival skills. Getting cold feet when he was old enough he went for adventure telling his family goodbye. Running off for a cause for himself. eager, obedient and loyal. If he was to ever find an army he thought was of a worthy cause.  Humming songs and walking the road looking for an army. 

 

Working many small jobs he bought some basic materials and clothing for his trip and headed off. While on the road he found books on many subjects. Reading about history and wars. Practicing swordplay while stopping. A favorite subject for him was meditation. Practicing it. He would take a moment every known and then to relax and meditate. One way he meditated was the use of a pendulum having it swing pack and forth putting him into a trance while in this state he could relax inside and out. Now on the start of a new jorny he hopes to learn more on how to become a great knight one day. To hope to become friends to many people and see what is going to happen next.

 

 

Personality Traits: Kind. bit of a smart ass. Honorable Loyal 

Ambitions: To find find a army and cause to join and become an officer of one to be proud off.

Strengths/Talents: Swordsmanship,  tactition. 

Weaknesses: Can be manipulated threw hypnosis/mental magic or control . can let emotions get to him. stubborn as a mule on his ideas. magic. his loyalty can become  a hinder if he starts to question himself. food.

 

[Pureimp10 5691]

[Pureimp10 5691]

What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help of need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

 

- Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect, please correct them using the Definitions Guide found on this post:

Remember to write them out in your own words.

 

- Please include more server lore into your biography. Just like Game of Thrones or Skyrim; Lord of the Craft has it own unique towns, cities, creatures etc. Please show you understand the general setting by including some in your biography.

 

- There were some grammatical and spelling errors in this application. It would be great for you to go back and fix them, as LotC is heavily text based.

 

[Pureimp10 5691]

 

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

- The requested edits were not made in time.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

[Pureimp10 5691]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.