Scoman987's Application.

[scoman987 0]

How old are you? I am 15 years of age..

In game name: scoman987

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: (GMT-08:00) Pacific Time (US & Canada

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I can speak English fluently.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a very athletic person that likes to escape from the world. I'm outgoing and very respectful. I enjoy a good story once and a while and love the outdoors.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly? I could play on the server 3-5 hours a day on the weekends. About 2 hours a day during the week.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I've played minecraft since 1.2_2 alpha

-What do you know about roleplaying?:A role-playing game is a game in which the participants assume the roles of characters and collaboratively create stories. Participants determine the actions of their characters based on their characterisation, and the actions succeed or fail according to a formal system of rules and guidelines. Within the rules, they may improvise freely; their choices shape the direction and outcome of the games. This is far as I know about the system of role-playing.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect this server to be a community of strong role-players following a certain character that they having chosen. I know there will be different races such as dwarf, elf, human, and orc. I expect there to be friendly community.(only if you follow the rules). I expect there to be vast cities for each race. I expect to love this server because it looks like a well ran server that has good rules. Most of what I expect is a really good role-playing server.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I used to play on Interitus, unfortunately the server went down a long time ago, and never went back up.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?I have read the rules and I looked over the lore. I think the rules are quite far, and the lore is sure an interesting thing itself.

-Name the 4 races on this server.- Races: Dwarf, the elves, the humans, and the orcs.

-How did you hear about us?: I heard about this server through a youtube user called named "Dave and Dave."

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? My Lotc forum name is scoman987.-/Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: scoman987

-Character Name: Sylivian

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography: My characters name is Sylivian. Sylivian was born in The Royal Kingdom of Oren. His parents raised him his whole life. Sylivian was a quiet boy. He never started problems but was always the one to finish them. He always went to his uncle's house, to learn the ways of the Assassin. Sylivians parents never wanted to show him the ways of the Assassins, but his uncle was furious on this, so he secretly taught Sylivian the ways. At age of 11 Sylivian was filling out kills for his uncle. His uncle was a corrupted man, but a good hearted person. Syllivian is now 20 years old. His uncle was getting on his nerves now. Sylivian was so fed up he decided to leave and explore the world of aegis. When he returned from his journey he went to see his parents. when he got there they were dead on the floor. He found a note on the wall written in blood saying "Why, Why did you leave" and then a signature saying "your favorite uncle". Ever since that day Sylivian has become dark and a mean deadly man. Now anyone that bothers him either gets ransacked or killed, but is still friendly person. He wants to find his uncle, but is not his objective. He wants to go earn money by either working, getting hired to kill, or ransacking. He thinks nothing is left in the world. He is searching for what he wants to do. Now he will go to The royal Kingdom of Oren to make a living there.

-Character Age: 20

-Character Appearance: Blue eyes, with a black satin robe, with a hood.

-Character Personality: My character is a dark man with evil thoughts. He still will befriend people if he trusts them. He moves silent and doesn't talk that much.

-Your ambitions: Sylivian's ambitions are to get hired to kill, ransack or find a job. He wants to build a secret home base.

-Can your character read or write?:He can write and read very efficiently.

-Can your character mine?:He's a very capable miner but prefers not to.

-Are you a capable builder?: Sylivian is very capable of building. He loves making booby traps. Piston traps is his specialty.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes he can wield a sword, for his uncle taught him.

-Enjoy Farming?: He loves to farm, and loves to bake bread.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Sylivian can sneak and can make booby traps. He can also shoot a bow very well.

-A screenshot of yourskin:http://minecraftskinspro.com/default.asp?action=readreviews&link=7049

[NairOG 1]

For start, assassin story is rather unimaginative, most of the application has it in them. Your character seems rather ... colorful, slayer/dark/friendly, that needs fixing.

Advice: put all your ideas on the board. Write down how your character evolves chronologically. Decide one path and most important be IMAGINATIVE. Minimum of seven lines, aim for grade 5+ (long bio).

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been.

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Also, do NOT contact me in order to view your new application.

[scoman987 0]

but this I thought was good. I really dont get why you have to deny me:(