[Denied] My Application

[lordiasd 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:RedRain96

How old are you?:19

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes i understand.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes i'v red the rules.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Keeping in character all the time, to make it feel immersive.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? : Tried to find Roleplay servers.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: acting as someone. playing a role. and keeping in it like you'r a different person.

What is metagaming?: is the oposite of roleplaying. when talking " out of the character" when it doesn't belongs to the character in the roleplay.

What is powergaming?: is a style of interacting with games or game like systems, particularly roleplaying games , with aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal, to the exclusion of other considerations such as storytelling, atmosphere and camaraderie.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Duke Andry

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: human

Character’s age: 19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Duke Andry is a grown man that was born in waekefield. lived there with his family till age 6, and the army decided to take his father to serve in the army and to fight in the war that was currently was 2 years already.

2 years have past and he never came back. he didnt loose hope and he decided to join the army and find him. he was a successful swordsman and a pretty good archer. he at age 16 already was in the front lines and battled for his country that was loosing badly. till he came across one of the generals. they were fighting and talking and somehow the general spoke about his father and he told him he was already dead. Lordiasd was raging from anger and fight with all his strength and sliced generals head. the battle at the day was won by him and the army and he got promoted. but he rejected it and decided to run from the army and to find the one that was responsible for his fathers death.

then the journey started exploring the world and to find the killer. 

in his journey he discovered a ball in a cave that shined.. when he touched the ball it exploded and left a mark on his body and face and he got new powers. he suddenly became a lot stronger physically.

 

Personality Traits:  very strong and smart

Ambitions:to find the killer and explore the world

Strengths/Talents:Swordsman , archer. - fighting.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: the "Death of his father"

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):Tall, handsome, ripped body, 75kg, 186m.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://imgur.com/qFqS4mg

Edited December 9, 2015 by lordiasd

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

Your definition of Metagaming is vague, please refer to http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying for guidance.

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying for guidance.

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for humans can be found on the Wiki ( http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Humans )! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events.

Please fill in your weaknesses and inabilities to compensate your strengths and skills. The death of your character's father is not enough of a weakness...

Your skin does not match the appearance of your character.

The skin you are using is commonly used, please find or create another one.

Please go through and check your grammar, spelling and punctuation.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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