[Denied] Application

[SailorMina101 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

 

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: SailorMina101

 

How old are you?: 16

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No cyberbullying

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A friend

 

 Are you aware the server is pg-13: yes

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don't make sense? no

 

Definitions

 

 

 

What is roleplaying?: To act out a certain part or character in a game or real life.

 

What is metagaming?: A method used in a game that follows a certain rule set.

 

What is powergaming?:  style of innteracting  with games that maximise progress towards a goal, with exclusion of elements such as storytelling

 

 

In-Character Information

 

 

 

Character’s name: Mirageme

 

Character’s sex: Female

 

Character’s race: High Elf

 

Character’s age: 94

 

 

 

Biography: Born in Malinor, Mirageme was abandoned by her parents once they saw she was a female. Left to live among the streets, she would steal small clumps of wool to make herself her trademark shawl. This added to her mysterious character. No one knew who she was personally. Once or twice, someone would recognize her for running through the streets, or stealing a magic item from their shop. One day, she was trying to convince a man to hand her a magic book, when she saw a curious girl whom she’s never seen before. That was strange since she knew every last person in the town. She realized she was staring at the girl, because she began to flee. Mirageme tried to follow her, but lost her in the wave of townsfolk. She went back to the man, whom had called the town guards. Mirageme ran to her little tent, but the figure who she saw haunted her to this very day.

 

Personality Traits: mysterious, wise, shy, courteous, mischievous

 

Ambitions: Connect with magic and learn ways to control it

 

Strengths/Talents: singing, magic

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: weakness to dark magic

 

Appearance: purple eyes, silver hair, purple clothing. 6ft 105 lbs

 

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

You have been denied for following reasons:

• Your definitions have been plagiarized from internet. This is your last warning.
• Your current story seems like a cliche (the whole abandoned parents thing and going rogue), but I believe one more paragraph in your biography can fix that!
• Could you please add more lore into your application? Feel free to use our wiki about our current Realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• Your character can't posses any sort of  magic in your application.
• Your strengths and weaknesses are not even. Please add more to them.

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 24 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

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