[Denied] [Pending]Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Xandit

How old are you?: 12 almost 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: "

Do not change your username to anything vulgar, inflammatory, or offensive to other players on LoTC. Accounts breaking this rule will be banned for thirty days - The period of time that Mojang requires before another change can occur. "

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I searched for roleplaying servers on google.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: The act of being someone who is different than you. Ex. Being shy irl and having all the friends in game.

What is metagaming?: Using outside knowledge to your advantage. Ex. Someone tells you there is a secret button to get riches and you use it.

What is powergaming?: Forcing an action upon another. Ex. Forcibly cutting anothers limb off.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Xanit Rali

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 32

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Xanit was born in a small hunting village near the duchy of Istria. He lived there until he was 14 years old, and his parents died in a fire. He wandered the surrounding country side, living on his wits. He knows well how to wield a bow, and can fletch his own arrows.

Since the fire, Xanit has wanted to see more action. He tries his best to get along with all, but is constantly bored and doesn't pay attention. He rarely has friends, but he protects them as he would a family heirloom. He has no attachments to places, so he is constantly on the move. Many times he has used a false name to get out of sticky situations.

Personality Traits: Curious, inquisitive, loyal, is afraid of fire

Ambitions: To become the greatest adventurer

Strengths/Talents: Pickpocket, stealth, rogue like stuff

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Is not able to swim and also phases out when not doung anything important.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He has brown hair, brown eyes, a weird shirt with two x's on it, blue leggings, and red shoes.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): Go to: https://t.co/DziIFI1s4I

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Spoiler

 

Your application has been put on [PENDING]

 

What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

-All three of your definitions are a bit vague. Please give a more detailed description.

 

-You need to have two well written paragraphs which include server lore. Here is the link to help you:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

-Your weakness isn't actually a weakness. Please give your character more of handicap. (I.E. Can't swim, can't shoot a bow)

 

-You need to add a picture or link of your skin so I could be able to review it. 

 

If you want help or need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

 

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

-Your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions are still a bit iffy. 

 

-Your biography still contains little server lore. Please add more in order be accepted:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

You may reapply in Six hours.

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