[Denied] Taylan's Application

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Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Deepad63
How old are you?: 16
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  Moderator verdicts are final. Do not press the issue or go to another moderator if such a verdict is unfavorable to you.

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Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No, I understand all rules.
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Very nice a RPG server.
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: people act as if he is living in the game
What is metagaming?: To pity the opposite in RP                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            What is powergaming?: That is to make itself one of the more powerful
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Mehmed
Character’s sex: Male
Character’s race: Human
Character’s age: 34
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Mehmed's father died a war. Mehmed's mother died with illness. He is go to Turkish State and He is a Turkish Swordman.
Personality Traits: Ambitious and handsome.
Ambitions: Write book and fighting
Strengths/Talents: good use sword, He love Turkish people
Weaknesses/Inabilities: He is alone and not good use bow
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Long hair, green eyes, Height: 178 Weight: 79
(If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

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• Both your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect and need revision. You can find the real definitions in the guide bellow. Though make sure to keep it in your own words and to not metagame.
• Your biography is a few sentences, not two whole paragraphs. Please lengthen it out and flesh your character out more.
• Your biography contains no server lore whatsoever, lore acn be found all over the Forum and on the Lore thread.
• THere is no Turkey in Lord of The Craft, LoTC uses unique locations and none pertaining to real life.

 

You may reapply in 24 hours.

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