whitelist application [Denied] PumPilDiePumkin's Application

[Blynn 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: for now -)) PumPilDiePumkin but it needs to be Blynn 

How old are you?: 15 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes i read it in the rules

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: well i readed a lot of tules and the one rule of  The Forum Rules.   Do not post or link material that may/will cause harm to other people or their computers. This includes ‘screamers’. is the rule i most agree wich

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):well i think i understand them

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? i am looking for roleplay servers a long time already , when i "found" one i saw its not roleplay but just classes like healer and stuff where you don't play a carracter , so i stay looking until a friend told me about this and i am super exited to check this roleplay server out :D 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: roleplay is something where you need to pretent as someone als your (carracter) in the story can by completelly difrent than you are in real life , you need to make a story and in the same time stay in your carracter i think the story of your carracter is the most inportand cuz you will need to go forwarts into that story , also roleplay is a fun thing but can take some time work and you need much free time 

What is metagaming?:  it means you don't need to pretent like someone els or to be yourself you can make your own carracter , and roleplay is mmaked to be fun so don't take a role you don't like

What is powergaming?: i think it means that it can be hard to roleplay and you need to have the power to keep doing it 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Blynn

Character’s sex: Man / Boy

Character’s race: Human -  Heartlander 

Character’s age: 28

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Personality Traits:  (i will add my carracther's story down / for if youre intrested)  my carracter is a bit crazy , hi try to act cool and hate stuff but deep inside there hide's a big love , ill stop hire so i don't make it to long

Ambitions: War , Blood , history , and  nature places 

Strengths/Talents: Hunting wich Bow , far vision 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Golden Sword's , fish flesh , and beeing hurt from the back 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 1m78 height  weight 60.05

(my carracter's story) : Blynn .... a Human Boy 7 years old ... a nation named "The Vanu" burned his born place burned the city where hi growed up .... hi has been trown to jail by the Vanu ... until The Army of "The Titan Republic" came in and saved everyone ..... but that doesn't matter at all the Titan Republic whas a nation where thay let children fight into the biggest fight's so thay don't lose soldiers .... Blynn servived a lot But S-have Seen and hear ... fell a lot that Hurt's him .... afther a while a Vanu Soldier drew Blynn's eyes .. the vanu soldier leaved him alone there .... feel the pain of everything hearing screams of the wounded children .... some hour's later a man in gray and Black clothing took him away hi wispered Blynn in the ear's i can give your eye's back even better than befor ... the ownly thing you need to do is .... drink this "wather" (( Blynn din't can see it whas Demon blood) hi drinked it and his eye's grown back but in Black and red ... the Demon came inside of Blynn ... because the Demon hi get's crazy and feel like hi want's to kill a lot of thing's no matter who or what ...... hi started killing village's ... Castel's ...for a long time ??? (28 years old) .. Blynn pass the place where hi got born .. hi remember's how life whas then ... funny happy and peacefull memories came up ... but than Blynn remebers the breaking memories of how the Villige burned down ..... atleast hi remembers himself again , that make's the Demon weaker .... the Humanetty back into him .... now his Half Demon Half Human hi lurned to control himself so hi can join the normal human live style back .. hi goes to a place where the pouple get called as "Heartlander " also where no one know's what Blynn did . and so began his journey (end story) (TIme now)

--- i hope you like the story --

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-Your entire application is deplorably written. Strewn with every form of grammatical error under the sun, and is un-understandable at many places.

 

-None of your definitions are correct.

 

-You need to actually answer each question as it asks. Length is of no matter to us as long as it is listed.

 

-Your character's biography is un-understandable.

 

-Your character's biography lacks any server lore.

 

-Demons as you're depicting do not exist in the world of Lord of The Craft. There're godlike beigns called daemons, yet no demons.

 

-Your character is 60 what...? Kilograms? Pounds?

 

-Your character's strengths and weaknesses are not valid strengths or weaknesses.

 

-Your minecraft skin's picture si too small to make out.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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